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[sheankelor]

Title: A wish granted
Author: Ree
Theme: Family -frost
Genre: General
Version: Silver Millennium - Fates/Sihde storyline
Rating: G

Most of these characters belong to Takeuchi Naoko. The ones that don't are my creations.

Comments

[seniumboy]

I like this, but it's too bad you didn't write the tale. If you decide to come back to this, I hope you do write it. The story came out really good. I thought all this time they were on the moon, and that her mom had the crystal but wasn't using it because of it's power. I might change the inscription on the statue, but other than that this story is pretty solid. No spelling errors found too :)

[sheankelor]

What would you change the inscription too?

And there were no spelling errors...*gasp* Yeah!!!

[seniumboy]

Maybe something like... "Trust in your heart, and the people will trust theirs to you." Something with the same meaning but bolder.