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[raya_light]

Title: Not-So-Childish Fears Part I - Summer Vacation

Comments

[sheankelor]

Hum-m-m-m an interesting take, Makoto having a phobia. *off to read part two*

[raya_light]

Mmm, yes. Hopefully, I have a rational explanation. *smile*

[seniumboy]

Lol I hope you do too, because this has a lot of promise. I like how you include little things like the mother's skirt and physical features. You could get away with stating in the intro that the rustling of leaves could be taunting Makoto. But I guess that depends on her fear itself (goes to read part two)

[raya_light]

^-^ Thanks! *ponders the thought of rustling leaves*