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SM Monthly Fanfiction Challenge Theme #64 (05MAR06)

Mar 06, 2006 13:14

Title: Clash of Silver and Gold
Author: Raya
Theme: Villains / Role-Reversal
Genre: Drama
Version: Alternate Reality (Silver Millennium)
Rating: PG-13

Disclaimer: All of the characters in the story below were created by Takeuchi Naoko. Paper dolls, however, belong to anyone.

Canon, spelling, grammar, and punctuation corrections are ( Read more... )

mar'06, prince endymion, princess serenity, kunzite, beryl, silver millennium, zoisite, mars, jedite, nephrite, mercury, jupiter, venus, au

Comments 4

sheankelor March 8 2006, 03:17:04 UTC

Very interesting. I like the way you portrayed ( sp?) Beryl. Well done^-^!

raya_light March 8 2006, 14:07:49 UTC

Mmmm... Thanks. I think it can use some tweaking, especially near the end. But first I have to catch up. ^-^

Go nominate stories in sm_monthly! dark_branwen said you could! *smile*

seniumboy March 10 2006, 05:47:14 UTC

I like it too, this is excellent role reversal. I can't suggest anything that would need fixing or anything, and I really like reading about the senshi being evil. Something about seems very right to me. :P

Great job ;)

raya_light March 10 2006, 14:26:54 UTC

^-^ Thanks. I just feel the need to smooth some of the transitions in the end and add some general polish. We'll see if I have the chance to before the end of the month, though.

I need to go comment on your stories, too. I've been reading, but I got so far behind I haven't had a chance to comment yet...