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[sheankelor]

Title: Unexpected meeting Part 5 - Secret Relationship
Author: Ree
Theme: Crackfic - voice
Genre: General
Version: AnimeManga Crossover Doctor Who - Peter Davison
Rating: G

They're not mine...they're not yours unless you are Takeuchi Naoko, or the BBC. Well, some of them might be mine.

Comments

[raya_light]

I laughed so hard when I first read this. And I'm still laughing, hahaha.

The Doctor looked down at his female companion. "Yes? What is it, Tegan?" (Otherwise, it's a bit too abrupt for Peter.)

Tegan shot a questioning look at Setsuna. - Slightly possessive? Protective? Tegan's been protective of him since his difficult reincarnation, ne? Or perhaps a curious look, if she thinks that Setsuna is a former companion?

"Until later comma Meioh-san." And again in front of Doctor-san.

the Doctor shew his companions out the door <-- *giggle* Shew... Shoo? or Show?

Setsuna! Setsuna! <-- If the Doctor and Setsuna are using honorifics, shouldn't Minako-chan, too?

Surely comma? you're not planning to go out with him?"

*le sigh* Off to a meeting... But I did it!

[sheankelor]

I had the wrong tense for shew, but it was the word I wanted. And should I mark it as comedy? shadowryvan didn't.. And thanks for fixen the Doctor's reply. And the Doctor and Setsuna only used honorifics once, it was in jest.

I'm glad this one was enjoyable. I just hope the set is considered cracky enough. It started sounding too reasonable of an idea.

[raya_light]

Actually, I think you wanted shooed, but...

[sheankelor]

possibly....but it stands as it is in the voting^-^