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[sheankelor]

Title: Looking for a Key Part 3 - Secret Relationship
Author: Ree
Theme: Crackfic - Lollipop
Genre: General
Version: AnimeManga Crossover Doctor Who - Tom Baker
Rating: G

They're not mine...they're not yours unless you are Takeuchi Naoko, or the BBC. Well, some of them might be mine.

Comments

[raya_light]

Hahaha... I'll wait to give my editorial comments, but Cosmos Guardian as the White Guardian? They looked nothing alike! Not to mention the White Guardian was male... *grin* Yeah, yeah, I know... She was being sneaky for the Gallifreans.

Neat idea for the Key to have been broken at the end of the SilMil at Zero Star. A very neat tie in and twist at the same time. ^-^

Now, time to eat a sandwich or something and head to bed. *sigh* I have to go back to work tomorrow... Boo.

[sheankelor]

Well, since I don't have the Key to Time series, I couldn't go and check on that part, but it fit so-o-o well. So I'll take your excuse.. Yeah that is it. She was tricking the Galliferyans. ^-^

[raya_light]

Okay, editorial wait is over. (Though I'd rather be writing the phone booth story, hahaha...)

bag of jelly babies I guess you could leave it beans here, but you must change it for the next reference. "Jelly baby?" I mean, that's what he called them!

gave me a device for finding them

a new companion, Romanadevrosluna or something like that." He frowned. "I really must shorten that up a bit. Talk about impractical..."

If going with something like the above: Pluto raised an eyebrow in amusement at the obviously mangled name.

...is even more of a fable than I (I think).

"Well, yes,... It is... But it means I won't be able to complete your missions." He placed a finger beside his long nose and nodded at her knowingly with twinkling eyes.

'I wonder why Guardian Cosmos suddenly needs the Key to Time?' An uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach warned her to watch the time stream even more diligently than before. Something was going to happen.As always, feel free to ignore my embellishments/characterizations. ^-^ But do

[sheankelor]

Okay.. edited.. your ideas are now incorporated.. and some of my own.. I did a major thought edit for the Doctor. Can you check the flow?

[raya_light]

Oops... Forgot. It's good! Edits nicely incorporated and expanded on, 'though it would be more fun for him to mangle Romana's name. Hahaha, did you catch the joke in my mangled version?

[sheankelor]

nope.. but I did now! Hahahahaha! Too Cute!