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Feb 08, 2007 23:25

Title: Torn Apart
Author: Raya
Theme: OTP / Ashes by EmbraceGenre: Angst ( Read more... )

usagi, myu, february '07, mamoru

Comments 9

sheankelor February 9 2007, 20:30:58 UTC

sad.... so sad.... But nicely done....

raya_light February 9 2007, 22:59:56 UTC

I guess it will do. It's not what I really wanted to do, but... That story will have to be AU, I guess. It's been running around in my head for a while (Usa dissolving into Nehelenia as time passes, and the Senshi doing their best to help her and yet protect the planet at the same time). Unfortunately, I can't quite seem to get started on it because the Myu ends with a little too much optimism, hahaha. That, and I don't do angst well and I know it. Darkness I'm all right at, but angst? Ah well.

Glad you liked it even though it was sad!

sheankelor February 9 2007, 23:35:24 UTC

But.... if she knows all will be okay.. does she turn into Nehelenia.. ah the puzzles of timetravel...

raya_light February 10 2007, 01:02:25 UTC

Haha, that was the fun of it. It is a slow slide into the dark side of her soul. That, and somehow she comes to blame him for her pain and loneliness, so the senshi are trying desperately to find his reincarnation before she does so they can protect him. I am so mean...

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aserene February 11 2007, 04:11:37 UTC

very sad...but beautiful and touching!

raya_light February 12 2007, 01:34:50 UTC

Thank you. ^-^

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raya_light November 9 2009, 18:28:20 UTC

*smile* Thank you.

seniumboy November 15 2009, 07:27:52 UTC

Very touching indeed. This turned out very well, the length of it was just right I think.