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Jan 27, 2007 21:51

Title: Interrupted - Part II
Author: Raya
Theme: Haruka / Entrance
Genre: General / Drama
Version: Manga
Rating: G
Word Count: ~457

Disclaimer: Ten'oh Haruka and Kaioh Michiru were created by Takeuchi Naoko. I have merely converted them into real looking simulacrums and tried my best not to butcher their characters.

( Interrupted - Part II )

michiru, haruka, january '07

Comments 4

sheankelor January 28 2007, 14:56:01 UTC

Poor Haruka. Now she is going to feel bad that she interupted.

Nice entrance, nice meeting, good start of them together. ^-^

raya_light January 28 2007, 18:46:29 UTC

Ah... But did she interrupt? Note how long Michiru was playing before she stopped so abruptly. Haha, even I'm not sure it was her suddenly noticing Haruka or something else.

Entrance (be-glamour) was what I was originally going for with this whole story, but intense and entrance (opening) found their way in, hahaha.

What did you think of the incorporation of Boléro? Once you knew what song it was (and I really couldn't think of any way to bring it out sooner), could you feel it through both parts?

sheankelor January 29 2007, 03:00:33 UTC

I actually don't recognize the song, and didn't have a chance to go listen to it this morning. So I'll tell you later...

raya_light January 29 2007, 03:12:48 UTC

*blinks in surprise* You don't? Oh. I think you will after you listen to one of the links. You don't have to listen to the whole thing. It's kind of repetitious, so just a little bit should jog your memory. You know? J said the other night that he didn't recognize it either. How very odd...