The Lion's Heart: Part 11

[ravenya03]

Okay, we're finally moving into new material now! With the gang separated once more, Will and Djaq run into dire trouble whilst Allan and Luke make a last desperate attempt to deliver the Pact of Nottingham into King Richard's hands.

Comments

[roh_wyn]

Oh, an update, and action-packed too.

Allan: Who am I? I’m Sir Robin of Locksley!

LOL. We are Robin Hood indeed. Loved this bit of cleverness from Allan, but I worry that it's just going to cause more trouble for all of them in the end.

Also, holy cliffhanger, Batman. How long before we find out what happens to poor Djaq and Will, all tied up and left to die? *chews nails*

[ravenya03]

Not long, it'll be up tonight!

Glad it didn't disappoint!

[dolorosa_12]

Fantastic! I especially appreciate that you (accurately) portray Richard as not being able to speak English. I study medieval literature, and the language issue in the show always really annoyed me (although I don't see how they could've got around it without having large portions of each episode subtitled). I loved how you took details from the series ('letting the desert decide') but used them in a more plausible way. Can't wait to see what happens next.

[ravenya03]

I especially appreciate that you (accurately) portray Richard as not being able to speak English.

Thanks, although I have to admit that I cheat a little bit in the next part!

[ladyarcherfan3]

Hurrah for the update! I can't wait to get to the other parts and see where this all heads!