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cruelest_month August 4 2009, 03:35:20 UTC
Aww, that's so cute. I love how much they love each other.

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ravens_rising August 4 2009, 03:42:29 UTC
*flails* Why did this have to be the first one of mine you read? xD It's so... written at midnight crack filled fluff insanity that I rushed to finish for a deadline. xD *sheepish* But I'm glad you thought it was cute anyway! :)

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kohaku_shuurai August 4 2009, 06:19:30 UTC
oh, man, that last line was good. I was kinda thinking... they aren't inside yet, um... yah. XD
I like the cake bit! Carrots for the plot bunnies!
(sorry nothing new from me tonight, but I'm workin' on it!)

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ravens_rising August 4 2009, 14:35:43 UTC
I was thinking that too the whole time, but they refused to stop and move inside, soo... I added that last line. xD Glad you liked it!
Glad you liked the cake bit too! Yay carrots! Mwahaha. *____*
(hehehe YAY! *glomp*)

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bluecrazed August 4 2009, 07:42:21 UTC
awwww XD I squealed all through this. Very nice vocabulary and the scenes were perfectly pictures in my head :) very nice. i enjoyed the read :D

X3 ur ukiXshun are always so cute! <3

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ravens_rising August 4 2009, 14:38:30 UTC
Thanks!! Glad you enjoyed it! :D And that you enjoy my ShunUki in general!

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laifan August 4 2009, 12:01:27 UTC
Daaaaw this was adorable! Can't wait to read the other chapters ♥

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spikykun August 4 2009, 14:08:09 UTC
:D

I seriously had the biggest smile plastered all over my face just reading and seeing this (yes, seeing. Part of why I love your writing is because you can picture the scenes so fucking perfectly), I, again, don't know if it's because they are so adorable, or because of you. Hell, you made me not-cringe-as-much at a DECELERATION OF LOVE, how's that for impressive? I'd even throw in a bit of a keyboardsmash at the end-of-date-nervous-kiss, which I adore. THAT IS ALL.
(I? ~Squeed~ at the fucking six words of RenIchi? NO WAI.)

BTW, I SWEAR I DIDN'T LEAVE, I JUST WENT TO SLEEP, SO IT DOESN'T COUNT. *pouts*

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ravens_rising August 4 2009, 14:32:34 UTC
YAAAY! I'm so glad you liked! ^_^ I was nervous posting 'cause this isn't the sort of thing I usually write... but I'm glad the adorableness came off well! *beams* Thank you so much for all the compliments! *tackles* I was nervous about the declaration, too, it seemed to come out of nowhere, but I wanted to put more of the prompt in there besides the season. xD Anyway, I'm glad it came out decent! Dude, I totally love end of date nervous kisses too xDD
(I put those six words of RenIchi in there for you, actually. xD I was writing this while we were talking yesterday. <333 Glad those six words made you squee! *adjusts halo* So, does that mean you'd like me to post the RenIchi companion drabble I wrote last night? ;) )

Uh huuuuh! *suspicious!face*

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spikykun August 4 2009, 16:00:17 UTC
(<3333, Rae! *blinks* MUST YOU ASK? GIMME! Er, I mean, I would much appreciate that drabble, Mistress.)

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ravens_rising August 4 2009, 16:14:25 UTC
(It's posted! <33333333)

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