Our Gentle Sin ~ 1/1 ~ [Reita & Ruki]

Jan 17, 2015 08:21

Title: Our Gentle Sin
Author: ravennightmare6
Chapter: 1/1
Genre: AU, High School, Angst, Drama, Dark Fic.
Rating: R
Pairing: Reita & Ruki (Akira & Takanori)
Synopsis: “I don’t understand...why are we different? Why don’t they treat us the same as everyone else?”
Warnings: Use of real names, Profanity, A Lot of Violence, Vaguely Described Sex Scene.
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rating: r, genre: high school, pairing: reita/ruki, genre:angst, genre: au, genre: drama, length: oneshot, fanfic, genre: dark fic

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lunapastilha January 17 2015, 01:51:51 UTC

I truly wanted to cry while reading this because unfortunately this can be a real story. And i love the speech about loving the person not the genre. It's perfect

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ravennightmare6 January 17 2015, 07:03:04 UTC
Oh please dear, feel free to cry. That was my intention. I cried while I was writing it....and then again when I was editing it. But anyway, I'm glad that you liked it and that you loved the message. It's a topic I'm so passionate about and I really wanted to write something that would make an impact.

Thanks for reading and commenting, honey <3

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fansandflames January 17 2015, 03:24:57 UTC
Thank you so much for this fic It's truly my passion this topic, and you've written it so lovely as all your fics are. The end was strong and beautiful hope to see more from you soon.

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ravennightmare6 January 17 2015, 07:05:59 UTC
No, thank you for reading it and understanding the message. I was a little worried that people might get offended. Not because of the way part (obviously) but because of the way Christians were portrayed. But I really wanted to write something powerful.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting, honey <3

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leifang666 January 17 2015, 13:39:58 UTC
This was wonderful. Even if you stopped before anyone died, it's such a powerful message of just how hate can make people feel.

I can't spot a single flaw in this story. :)

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ravennightmare6 January 17 2015, 16:20:05 UTC
Thank you so much sweetheart. This is an issue that I'm super happy about and I'm so sick of seeing the hate that everyone and anyone gets. So I thought I'd pour my frustrations into a fic x3 '

You flatter me, darling. Thank you so much for reading and commenting <3

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ravennightmare6 January 17 2015, 23:02:47 UTC
Ah...I sound like a horrible person when I say that I'm glad that it made you cry, but that was really what I was going for when I wrote this one. I wanted to make something really, truly powerful and hauntingly real. Because marriage equality and gay rights is such an important personal topic to me. It's very close to my heart. So my aim really was to make something real. So I'm glad that it's had the desired effect. Plus, that song 'Take Me To Church' is a song and video that really resonated with me and it gave me such inspiration to write ( ... )

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setenay629 January 21 2015, 11:39:57 UTC

but.. but... T.T why not an happy ending.. huwaaa 。・°°・(>_<)・°°・。actually it was an happy sad ending. they are together now, aren't they.. :'( crying.. crying.. crying...

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