Fic: Thy Native Innocence (FMA)

[ravenclaw42]

(But first, OT: OMG I MADE A 93 ON A VELEK TEST. *ahem*)

Fullmetal Alchemist fic inundation, part the first. I'm going in the order of their completion, and this was the very first of the pile currently finished or underway. Right now I'm not trying to follow any structure, although I'm still unnofficially using the prompts from 7stages just because I

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[ravenclaw42]

Heh, same. I feel bad for all of Greed's flunkies. They really do love him, and none of them are quite human, so they all understand that their love is everything and nothing to him.

Secondary characters, man. Gotta love 'em.

[yma2]

Nice. What a wonderful and deep characterisation of Greed you have there, and a not a bad portrait of Martel too. But it's your delving into Greed's psychology, his constant want, what that means to him, that impresses me the most. His actions, the menace of his voice, indeed his voice in general is wonderfully done. An excellent piece of characterisation and character exploration. Bravo!

[anat_astarte]

Oh yes, I like the way you delve into Greed's psychology too...very, very nice work here.

!!

[arantzain]

Excellent!

Poetic and dynamic, really enjoyable. I'll be watching for the next!

-Rantza