Wow, that was really good. I love the character of Daniel already, he sounds like a really cool and complex villain and I can't wait to see what kind of story this turns into. I love the way you make his character so deep, on one level he could read like a stylish serial killer/assassin, on another he's utterly bat-shit, on ANOTHER he's a tormented genious and on yet still another he's simply a lost geek with nothing else to do. So beautifuly complex. I was very impressed by the drunken ramblings as well, it sounded like just the sort of thing people say when utterly pissed. It really, really works. As ever you write fantastic stuff, can't wait to read more.
I'm kind of looking forward to meeting the antogonist to Daniel's protagonist. Or should it be the other way around? Is this is a game with no bad guys...? Or nothing but bad guys?
Daniel's something in between. Chaotic Neutral? Chaotic Self-Centered? Geek Without a Cause? Something. Jesse is the everyman protagonist, definitely, although he will be developing flaws as soon as I come up with a few.
The antagonist is whatever goes against Jesse, which is Daniel some of the time, and the bad guy is whoever the reader wants it to be.
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As ever you write fantastic stuff, can't wait to read more.
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The antagonist is whatever goes against Jesse, which is Daniel some of the time, and the bad guy is whoever the reader wants it to be.
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