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[ravenclaw42]

I needed some more stuff to flesh out my writing samples for the Wolfe Scholarship app, so here's a few-words-over-a-drabble thing that I wrote to fill up a page. I like it. It leaves much room for possibility.

CrimsonThoughts flowed crimson through the places he worked, following him from room to room as he methodically tore down all the little

Comments

[yma2]

As ever your writing is utterly gorgious. I mean, if you could manage to spread this out and make it longer then perhaps you could use it for your portfolio? From what I can gather (and if I am wrong about this, I apologise) what you seem to have problems with is plot. Your actual writing is utterly gorigous, put putting it into a coherent narrative is frustrating, Ya? I know it's what I have difficulty with. Am I right in this or have I judged you wrongly?

[ravenclaw42]

Oh, you have judged me completely rightly. XD I absolutely cannot come up with decent original plots. Usually I can come up with enough for a one-shot or a character study, but not for an actual book or novella or whatever. That's why I rely on fanfic so much, because the plot is already there and I can just play with the characters. You notice how glacially my fics movie, plot-wise. *headdesk*

And thank you about the writing itself being good. ^_^! *swelled head* Now if only I could get as good a handle on ideas as I have on descriptions... >_

[owlmaid]

I agree, more plot should come! I'm intrigued...