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[ravenclaw42]

Prose poem written for AP English. I was given a formula, but I deviated from it rather dramatically. This is dedicated to all those out there who want nothing more than to be a slave to the muse.She was her own kind of girl, a figment of her own imagination. Sometimes she dared to wonder if she was alone in the world, but the thought alone was

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[yma2]

Very beautiful and wonderfully written, you've an amazing way with language. I particually liked the use of the recurring line, it just has that kind of lyricism that will stick in my mind for ages. Very beautifully written and I (like you, no doubt,) can very much sympathise with the main character! (:
Excellent work, one of the nices pieces of writing I've seen in along while!

[ravenclaw42]

The formula that our teacher handed out was for an "I Am..." poem, but I can't write in first person or present tense, so I decided "to heck with formulas!" and did it my way. ^_^.

Thanks so much (again!). I'm beginning to sound like a broken record there. *meep*