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Come Back to Me - Part 10

Jul 26, 2009 22:11

Title: Come Back To Me

Rating: NC-17 (You know why)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post best/worst wedding of the year.

A/N: SOME people *cough* xejanfan *cough* junebug *cough*, wanted smut. Does this qualify as smut? Cuz I’m not so good at writing it. Special shout out to xejanfan who was offended I only called her a little perv. So…YOU BIG PERV!! * ( Read more... )

fanfiction, come back to me, pepa/silvia

Comments 71

jeminai July 26 2009, 13:13:58 UTC

first off, one word:Poetry. You really are the bard! clap clap clap!
Maybe I should send an e-mail to Globomedia and tell them to hire you.
I couldn't resist adding this: wtf! They even get interrupted in the hospital???Is it illegal to lock the doors there? If not, these two doesn't know the word. lol

raven_bard July 26 2009, 21:12:04 UTC

*blush* Thanks so much for that praise! And lol to the last part...yes these two seem to have some kind of fetish for doing it in public places huh? And no, I don't think the word "lock" exists in either of their vocabularies. *chuckles* Thanks for reading and commenting!

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raven_bard July 26 2009, 21:15:00 UTC

Well..*toes the ground* It's only my 2nd time trying out a smutty chapter. But I'm glad you enjoyed it. And yes as I've told jeminai, these two and doing it in public places seem to go hand in hand. Hehe. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. ;-)

musicbuttons July 26 2009, 13:56:36 UTC

Umm....what did you say at the very beginning? oh yeah..."Cuz I’m not so good at writing it." If this wasn't good, I don't know why I'm needing a cold shower??

I said it before and I agree with jeminai, Globomedia has a new writer on staff they just don't know it...

raven_bard July 26 2009, 21:16:58 UTC

*snickers* How's that cold shower goin' for ya? Y'know I don't think Globomedia would hire me, this is even too risque for them to show on primetime television! But thanks for that high compliment. *blush*

junebuggy01 July 26 2009, 14:03:37 UTC

RAVEN!! HOLY TOLEDO!!!! I love you and your SMUT WRITING BRAIN!!! Okay... I have to stop yelling, I'm waking people up. This was brilliant and not just because of the sexy time, but also because you have a gift with words. Thank you

And thanks for the reminder as well. *kisses*

raven_bard July 26 2009, 21:20:08 UTC

*snorts* I have you and xenjanfan to blame. I have never finished an assignment so fast. Every other word in my textbook became "smut" cuz of you two. *wags finger* But I'm glad to see that it seems to have paid off, lol. Thanks so much for your kind words, I'm totally blushing here. And no problem bout the reminders. *blows kiss* ;-)

junebuggy01 July 26 2009, 21:54:32 UTC

I hope your rushed assignment was done thoroughly. W/O a few slip ups with the words boobies or nipples or... What was I saying? Ummm... Ummm Yeah Raven and SMUT!

raven_bard July 26 2009, 22:08:57 UTC

No worries on the assignment. I'm usually a "do it all last minute" kinda gal anyway and I still manage to pass. *grins* Lol to you pointing fingers at curly. But now I get to point at you, xejanfan AND curly. *chuckles*

*yawn* Oh it's so early here, the sun is too bright. Hate these 9am lectures. Oh well...medieval history here I come. Or chapter 11 here I come if I get bored in class. *winks*

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extessie July 26 2009, 14:13:33 UTC

*thud*

....

Hot.

*cold shower*

mauvebeads July 26 2009, 20:17:21 UTC

Same here...

raven_bard July 26 2009, 21:21:00 UTC

ROFL! Don't hurt yourself! Man all these cold showers going around...*shivers* It's too cold here for a cold shower.