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The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro - Topic: Clubbing

Oct 27, 2009 00:39

Title: The Secret Diary of Silvia Castro

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: What if Silvia kept a diary...of ALL her sexual exploits with Pepa?

A/N: Handed in my second last assignment today. *bounces happily* One more to go and I’m free! Like a...bird...superman....what's free? *shrugs* Soo I thought I’d celebrate my almost ( Read more... )

fanfiction, the secret diary of silvia castro, pepa/silvia

Comments 56

qosmio18 October 26 2009, 14:51:24 UTC

"The way her hands held that condensing bottle, fingers wrapped lovingly around its neck, her velvety soft lips covering the opening to allow the liquid to trickle into her mouth...no wonder the bottle was sweating" Umm bartender I'll have what she's having!

Wow *thud* I'm ok my legs gave out. (Note to self sit when you read a fanfic rating of NC-17)

Silvia is such a tease but it worked. Grrrrr! Great chapt.

Got luck on last assignment.

raven_bard October 27 2009, 10:41:18 UTC

*wince* Gods I hope you didn't hurt yourself. What were you thinking, standing up whilst reading an NC-17 fic? *chuckles*

I like writing Silvia the Tease; she's fun. And so deliciously cruel. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading.

lenageek October 27 2009, 15:08:58 UTC

Silvia the Tease - Tease with a capital T! Now that is hot! ;D

girlechick October 26 2009, 15:23:10 UTC

HOLY GOOD FUCK!!! I think you've been hanging round that junebug for too long. She has clearly rubbed off on you. Lol!
Great, scrap that. Excellent story Raven!!

raven_bard October 27 2009, 10:45:43 UTC

She's my wife...of course she rubs off on me. *snickers* Oh that innuendo was just sooo wrong...*laughs*

Thanks for reading and commenting.

supercontenta October 27 2009, 17:38:51 UTC

No, that innuendo was so RIGHT. I applaud you for your glorious wit.

av8rwinn October 26 2009, 16:46:03 UTC

Uhhhhhhhh. You just put a new meaning to clubbing.

raven_bard October 27 2009, 10:45:59 UTC

*chuckles* Fun though right?

lovelyafterglow October 26 2009, 18:09:11 UTC

"Nightclubbing. We're nightclubbing." Damn, now that song's stuck in my head.

But, uhm, yeah...wow. That was, uhm, yeah...wow.

Probably not a good idea to have read this at work. I'm thinking I need a cigarette break. :-D

raven_bard October 27 2009, 10:46:48 UTC

I downed a few drinks before I managed to finish writing this. Being slightly intoxicated helped. *grins*

Hope that cig helped. Thanks for reading and commenting.

lenageek October 27 2009, 15:10:15 UTC

Ahh, you are a talented woman who can drink and write so well at the same time! I'd never be so motivated when I'm tipsy/drunk! Haha!

lenageek October 26 2009, 19:57:31 UTC

Good lord! Raven, hon, you got me all religious again! [headdesk] Note to self: stop reading these when you're not supposed to! Damn, I almost wish I smoked, cuz like lovelyafterglow I feel like I need a cigarette!

I'm gonna go melt into a puddle of goo now...wonderfully, hot and descriptive...grr!!

raven_bard October 27 2009, 10:50:37 UTC

Tsk, tsk. Taking the Lord's name in vain. *laughs* But it normally means you enjoy the story so blaspheme away!

Glad you liked this new update...it was sorta inspired from a past event in my life. *grins* Not the sex on the dance floor...I'm not crazy enough for that. But the dancing with a stranger thing. It's always kinda fun when you gravitate towards a certain person on the dance floor.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Oh if you don't smoke, have a drink instead!