Romancing the Pain - Part 18

Sep 19, 2009 19:29


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: MA-15 (for violence)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Next chapter’s up for those still interested. Sorry if it’s a little untidy, I’m having a busy ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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mmm_kekse September 19 2009, 10:47:49 UTC
Holy fuck! ... and that's like... all I'm able to say right now. Silvia pulling that gun on Sara.
and Pepa... one week. fuck! that was dark. and way way way awesome. gruesome but... just great!!
but what's with all cliffhangers lately? *sighs in desperation* I want more. I always want more. I'm too greedy. but waiting patiently sucks!
Pepa needs to spill some mafia blood soon.
and hope you get all your assignments done and still have some weekend left. :)

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raven_bard September 19 2009, 11:08:32 UTC
*shrugs* It's kinda outta character for Silvia to do what she did to Sara but bordering on emotional breakdown can do that to a person. It was either that or kick a cop. *laughs*

Aaand...it's all cliffies because...because I can! *evil laugh* No, no...seriously it's not really intended to be a cliffhanger...but I can't put what I want into one whole chapter so I gotta find ways to split it up.

Urgh assignments...the thorn in my ass. Uni sux sometimes. At least when you're working there's more incentive...like you get paid to get up at some gods forsaken hour to do something. I'm basically paying the uni to torture me! *shakes head*

Thanks for reading and dropping a note...and yes, patience is a virtue *sing song voice* Next update in...a week. *grins*

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mmm_kekse September 19 2009, 11:32:17 UTC
I don't think it was out of character. not in a situation like that. getting send pictures everyday of your love getting tortured... if that doesn't break you then I don't know lol no I loved that you had her do that *nods*

well I surely wouldn't stop you if you tried to put everything in one hugely long never ending chapter :D

yeah getting paid so helps to get your ass out of bed. it's still hard sometimes though *laughs* but... *looks at your fic* ... you're not complaining about torture are you? *chuckles* or is the uni the place where you get all the ideas to let Pepa suffer so much?

oh and no problem I can wait a week *smiles* ...... seriously I can. I've total self control. *starts twitching* a week. nope it's great. doesn't feel like more torture at all. .......... you're joking right? *puppy eyes*

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raven_bard September 19 2009, 11:41:01 UTC
"is the uni the place where you get all the ideas to let Pepa suffer so much?" ~ Guilty...sometimes my imagination goes rampant when I'm sitting in a boring lecture. It helps to pass the time quicker if you imagine all the horrible things you could do to this lecturer who speaks in a monotone dull voice with absolutely no facial expression. If he didn't breathe, I'd swear he was a robot. *rolls eyes*

And yes, I'm joking. A week is very long and being a reader myself I understand the torture or having to wait for updates to unfinished stories. In fact...I'm working on the next chapter now...not writing it, just ideas. Soo...in a few days. Monday or Tuesday. *winks*

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lenageek September 19 2009, 11:56:52 UTC
Oooh shit! That was the first thing I saw when I read the first line of 'One week later'. A week?! You just about had me in tears again reading of Pepa's torture and Silvia's current condition. It didn't surprise me that Silvia pulled the gun on Sarah since she's so desperate and not herself. And is there a sliver of hope that Pepa can free herself now? Whew, is the torture stuff almost over? Hopefully Pepa/Silvia can kick some ass and be reunited soon! Still following this story with baited breath...

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raven_bard September 19 2009, 12:12:03 UTC
*hands you an Oreo* Weelll...I could have done 7 chapters of Pepa getting tortured, and believe me that wicked thought was bounced around getting some serious contemplation buuuut I decided to put "one week later" and save everybody the heartache. *laughs*

Torture stuff almost over..maybe. Pepa has only one knot loose. *holds up a finger* One. It's gonna take a while for her to untie herself, no?

Thanks for reading and commenting btw. *winks*

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raven_bard September 19 2009, 13:11:40 UTC
*hangs head* I know...I'm such a terrible person. Torture time will desist...soon. *chuckles* But feel free to go out and knock El Gordo's teeth.

You wanna do my homework? Really? Cuz it's a presentation and I HATE presentations...public speaking is so NOT my thing. I mumble and stutter and make a fool outta myself. *rolls eyes* It's just some lame way for the tutor to just sit back and let us do the work. Pfft.

Thanks for reading and commenting, update in a few days. *grins*

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sportysmurf September 19 2009, 12:41:44 UTC
Ow.
What have you got against our girls? Mental anguish, horrible physical pain? *curls into tiny ball of ow.*
Yet, I keep reading...It's gotta be over soon...*sniffles and holds hope for better days*

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raven_bard September 19 2009, 13:13:13 UTC
"What have you got against our girls?" ~ Nothing...I love 'em. *scuffs foot against the carpet* I'm just venting out my uni frustrations...the workload is driving me nuts. *chuckles* And I'm sorry, don't cry *hands you an Oreo* C'mon...gimme a smile huh? It'll all be over soon. I'm glad you're still reading though.

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I think I am going to need therapy bigmarianfan September 19 2009, 12:54:59 UTC
after this chapter, WOW was it intense! I have some advice for you because I have just left uni and am trying to find a job. It sucks, I would much rather be at uni, working ,drinking etc so make the most of it, the UNI years are the best years of your life!! Even listening to a boring lecturer is better than going on countless, terrifying job interviews ahhhhhhhh. BTW this was an AWSOME chapter, I cannot wait for the update, so keeeep writing please, you are one talented lady! x

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Re: I think I am going to need therapy raven_bard September 19 2009, 13:16:20 UTC
I made the most outta uni..it's my last semester and I'm so TOTALLY over the student life. I didn't even wanna come to uni in the first place, my mom made me. And job interviews aren't bad. I go to like 15-20 every summer when I look for summer jobs just for shits and giggles. That and the fact that I'm picky and like a huuge range of choices. *laughs*

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, BMF. Glad you liked the chapter.

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Re: I think I am going to need therapy bigmarianfan September 19 2009, 14:29:56 UTC
god I wish I was over student life, I still have not accepted that I've left! God I loved it there! 15-20 EVERY SUMMER??!!! WOW you like to keep your options open! Well I suggest you spend less time in lectures and more time writing your awsome fics! Lectures teach you nothing anyway, at my uni they put all the lectures up online so there was no need to go!

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Re: I think I am going to need therapy raven_bard September 19 2009, 14:38:14 UTC
*nods* They do that here too...such a stupid method. You put the lecture slides up online and nobody goes. So what some lecturers do is take attendance...like 10% of it counts to your final grade. *rolls eyes* Laaaame. I don't mind going to lectures if the lecturer is good...y'know, enthusiastic and such. But gods robot man? Kill me.

Yeah...like I said, I'm picky and some of the interviewers are such jackasses that it's so fun to push their buttons. *chuckles* Soo you miss uni life huh? Wanna trade? I've got *thinks* 5 3000word essays to do and a presentation. NOT fun. And I'm outta scotch. Can't write essays on a scotch free stomach.

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