Romancing the Pain - Part 13

Sep 03, 2009 14:36


Title: Romancing the Pain

Rating: M (for adult themes)

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Summary: Post episode 104 as well as my last fic, Come Back to Me. It’s basically its sequel; the events that occur after Silvia was released from the hospital.

A/N: Special shout out to mmm_kekse for having Darkwing Duck as your icon! And for loving Gummi Bears and ( Read more... )

romancing the pain, fanfiction, pepa/silvia

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capnfantastico September 3 2009, 05:07:12 UTC
wow

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 05:15:17 UTC
*shy smile* Thanks.

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xejanfan September 3 2009, 06:24:52 UTC
whoa! i thought that was MY icon for a second! hahaha! i thought to myself 'did i already comment? how could that be? i just finished reading it?' *faceplams* nice icon, capt!

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junebuggy01 September 3 2009, 05:20:15 UTC
Yay you updated! And wow it was amazing! Poor Pepa and her alcoholic self. That dream must have damn near killed her! I mean not only witnessing the love of your life being shot, but being the one who pulled the trigger. *Shakes head* That's just... ouchy.

And as for the ending, guess I'm not the only one into cliffhangers, huh Ravey babe? Love it! Love this story! Love you! :D

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 06:04:23 UTC
*nods* Can you imagine dreaming that you're the one who put a bullet into the love of your life? *shudders*

Thanks for the comment, honey. *hugs* As for the cliffhangers...well it must be catching *winks* I've a feeling people might be throwing those fish bones at me when they get to the end but hey, it's all part of the story. *chuckles*

Oh love ya back. *winks*

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xejanfan September 3 2009, 05:42:05 UTC
och! yer a cruel lass ta be fekkin' wi' me li' that!

oops! sorry, been talking to my scottish mate! heheh. so that was once again painfully amazing and beautifully written. pepa's pain is so visceral, her physical and emotional pain just leaps off the screen, in all its agonizing glory. the burn of the alcohol, the blurred edges of reality, the memories of the past, the abject horror of being the gunman... it's all mind-blowing. truly madly deeply love you and your writing abilities. damn. you're wonderful. that's just it. you are bliss. well, bliss wrapped in barbed wire doused in lemon juice and thrown into a hill of fire ants. but still, totally worth every bit of pain. absolutely. te quiero.

oh yeah, and i hate you for that cliffhangery, uh, cliffhangedness. argh! no no baby, i love you, just mentally and sexually frustrated... maybe you could help me out with those things? *sex first?*

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 06:12:38 UTC
*giggles* You have an ATROCIOUS Scottish accent, baby. *laughs* But your comment on this chapter more than makes up for it. You're a bit of a masochist, sweetheart...loving that gut-wrenching feeling of salt being rubbed into the wound. Tsk, tsk, tsk. But I can work that to my advantage...you wanna dabble in a bit of S/M? Huh? *smirks*

As for that lil cliffhanger...blame our wife...I caught the bug. *chuckles* But it's kinda fun to see y'all squirm. Oh and I read that fic you referred me too. *swallows* It was....well let's just say I'm not cold anymore. You tricked me...you wanted me all sexually frustrated too didn't ya? *shakes finger in your direction* Well congrats, love, you succeeded. And just for that I've a good mind not to "help you out" so to speak.

Buut..*pushes you onto the bed and straddles you. Yanks off my t-shirt and uses it to tie your hands together above your head* No touching, baby. *smirks and works a hand under your t-shirt, trailing fingers up your toned stomach, teasingly moving move to cup....*

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xejanfan September 3 2009, 06:23:01 UTC
awww goddammit! you had to pick THAT scene to reinact?!? what about the back rub one? why do my plans always seem to back fire with you? wait. *re-reads* no, you know what? i'm totally good with that! go ahead, tie me to the headboard, straddle me, rub yourself on me, let me arch under you, grinding into your heat, slide up over my face, let me taste you...

and what's wrong with my accent?! i thought it was pretty good! damn aussies think they're so cool. *wink* which you are! wait, no, you're not cool... you're hot, molten lava dripping over my chin, sweltering moist heat that envelops my tongue... *smirk*

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shaleb September 3 2009, 06:45:26 UTC
Woooo! Another Chapter of this awesome fic. I don't care how much angst you put into it. If it means having to read your wonderful writing, I'll take it! I swear I don't know how you do it. You describe everything with such intensity and passion. It's like being there in person. So much realness (if that's a word, I think it is). Anyways, thanks for sharing. So eager to read what happens next after that intriguing and suspenseful Cliffy.

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 07:07:25 UTC
*chuckles* I'm utterly pleased that you're enjoying the angst so much...cuz I really love writing it. And thanks for such a wonderful compliment on my writing. *shy smile*

So you liked that cliffhanger didja? *laughs* More to come soon, thanks for reading!

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shaleb September 3 2009, 08:05:04 UTC
Are you kidding me? I am an angst lover! I am just scared to admit it here on LJ. Even walls have ears here. *makes ninja eyes*

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 08:19:26 UTC
*giggles* No worries. I have totally outed myself to everyone that I'm an angst-lover. I mean, duh! Like they couldn't tell with my story. *chuckles* So come and join me in my angst club! *hands you a cookie in welcome*

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raven_bard September 3 2009, 07:09:53 UTC
Lol. Hiya Heaven. Glad I can get that kind of enthusiastic response outta ya. As for what happened, you'll find out soon.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. :-)

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