Pudgy fingers (Prompt 028, 100OriginalFic Challenge)

May 28, 2007 20:28

Title: Pudgy Fingers
Author: RavanaSnape
Prompt: 028 (Children)
Rating: PG-13
Length: 213 words

Summary: Children scare her...

Pudgy Fingers )

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originalpuck May 29 2007, 04:32:21 UTC
Another interesting allusion to what I'm beginning to suspect is a vampiric situation-- though I'd be pleased with a twist, too.

I like her take on children, and her proud independence-- it goes a long way to give me some information about her character. I'm curious about what she looks like now, and hoping to find it in another entry. ^^

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ravanasnape May 29 2007, 10:56:15 UTC
Oooh... thank you for such nice feedback :)

It's interesting that you suggest a vampiric situation... I hadn't thought of it that way before. In a sense I think it is, but perhaps not in the way you're thinking... (although she was definitely born human).

As to her looks? I haven't posted one that deals with that yet, although it'll definitely be one of the next ones that I post :)

(Btw - I absolutely love your icon :D )

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hallwaydancer May 31 2007, 17:54:35 UTC
Heh, babies are icky. And soon after they're born, they always look so freaky, all red and wrinkly and gross.

-GC

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ravanasnape June 1 2007, 15:02:46 UTC
And by finding them gross we've doing the planet a favour, since we're overpopulated at the moment :)

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