Comments | raug_moss: Fic: A Little Evil Comes A Long Way (Kahlan/Cara) 19/33

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Fic: A Little Evil Comes A Long Way (Kahlan/Cara) 19/33

Mar 16, 2013 21:38

Title: A Little Evil Comes A Long Way
Author: raug_moss
Pairings: Kahlan/Cara
Rating: NC-17
A/N: modern AU

( A litte evil... )

alternate universe, cara/kahlan, fanfiction, user: raug_moss, legend of the seeker, rating: nc-17

Comments 21

wkgreen March 16 2013, 21:25:55 UTC

Hmm...that is a quandary you have on your hands, Cara. And I don't mean Kahlan! That one is easy! ;) But the crime scene with a lack of bodies. And sounds more like Dewitt set the shooting up.

Waiting for more! :)

wkgreen March 16 2013, 21:26:57 UTC

Oh and glad you made Leo a good guy and that Cara ended things so quickly and as painlessly as possible.

raug_moss March 19 2013, 18:32:48 UTC

thank you :D there will be more, that much I can still promise xD
oh and yes a mysterious here, ending things with Leo there. Cara sure is one busy woman. but we all know she can handle it right?
I just needed to get rid of Leo though. as much as I love writing this story, it can't go on forever. I really admire those people who write like novels, anyways. thank you for commenting!

mrswoman March 16 2013, 21:44:41 UTC

slow steady build up of the inevitable Cara/Kahlan relationship and a fascinating case to boot. Thank you :)

raug_moss March 19 2013, 18:33:56 UTC

Kahlan/Cara is indeed inevitable! that much is sure. we'll get there eventually, I promise.
and thank you for leaving a comment :D

chickinwhite March 16 2013, 21:53:11 UTC

*eyebrow-raise*
...ok. I won't say anything...
But you know that you owe us a little something, dont you?
Looking forward to that :)

carissa190 March 17 2013, 00:16:48 UTC

I completely agree. ;)

raug_moss March 19 2013, 18:35:15 UTC

*coughs* yes I do realize that something might've been missing here and I also know that readers are waiting for something a little more romantic but to my defense, I felt like it wasn't the right time yet. it would've been too rushed for either of the characters, regarding the plot and all.
but we'll get there :D
thank you for your comment!

awesome water12 March 16 2013, 22:11:04 UTC

wahoo !!!!!!!!!!!! Yah you updated chapter 19 you been busy. I know i haven't commented on the story for awhile ultra busy. Let me comment on it. The story is running well and the relationship build up is slow but seems to work well as Cara/Kahlan need time to find out more about each other. However you depicted their attraction for each other well. I personally love this, however i think you could add perhaps Dalia more into the story and perhaps reveals a bit of Kahlan's past. Other than that it is great story. I love Cara rejecting Leo. He is my least favourite character. Overall i can't wait for the next update excellent story keep up Raug_moss I know you busy but pretty please could you revisit the story Cara/kahlan highschool story aka the fortune cookie or perhaps you will contine in the near future no pressure lol. It is a good story and such a shame to let it go. I know is much lol anyways take care.

Re: awesome raug_moss March 19 2013, 18:37:34 UTC

okay let me see here.
more Dahlia/Kahlan bonding and revealing some more about Kahlan's mysterious past - that I can do! I will work on actually getting some of that into the coming chapters, I was planning on it anyway.
oh and that other story? I had almost forgotten about it :x well what can I say? I'm still lacking some inspiration for that one, but I'll keep it in mind!
thank you for your great comment!