Comments | raths_kitten: Creature Comfort (J2, R, very AU)

raths_kitten

Creature Comfort (J2, R, very AU)

Jan 26, 2011 16:13

So, I guess my 2nd Blindfold falls under slightly disturbing, but uhm... bear with me. It's actually more schmoop than anything.

Title: Creature Comfort
Author: Vera
Pairing: Jensen/Jared, AU
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Me no own.
Word Count: 2,927
Summary: In a future AU where some humans are held as pets, Jared’s pet is Jensen.
Author’s Note: Written ( Read more... )

genre: rpf au, rating: r, pairing: jensen/jared, fics, fandom: supernatural

Comments 27

aythia January 26 2011, 15:29:56 UTC

This! Yes, I loved this fill and you did amazing work with it. I still want more though!

raths_kitten January 30 2011, 00:56:04 UTC

Thanks again. And yeah... you know, reading through some feedback reminded me why it would be so hard to write more. People expect Jared to teach Jensen to be human, but that's just not gonna work.

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raths_kitten January 30 2011, 00:56:36 UTC

Thank you for commenting again. :)

roxymissrose January 26 2011, 16:07:39 UTC

It was very disturbing, but in a *good* way. A way that made you think about this reality and ours, and how people can make themselves believe almost any kind of lie in order to live their lives comfortably. I'm probably not supposed to get this thinky about it, but I can't see this as being totally impossible. We had slavery in this country for generations, and the justification for it was all too similar to this. And now,*koff* getting back into the spirit of things, I did enjoy it very much. Feels like there are so many more stories that could come out of this.

raths_kitten January 30 2011, 00:58:35 UTC

Thank you very much. And yes, people can be very cruel, especially if they don't realize it because in their heads, it's totally justified. I'm glad you liked it.

athenaswirls January 26 2011, 16:16:38 UTC

I really liked that. I love how detailed you were and it sort of made me go huh?

That's a good thing. :)

raths_kitten January 30 2011, 00:59:04 UTC

Thank you very much!

mihka_mc January 26 2011, 16:44:38 UTC

Well that was interesting!? At first, I will admit that I was repulsed by the idea because I had trouble with the physiology of the pet but when you wrote about the brown suit, I could then see what the fic was all about so I continued reading and like roxymissrose said, it was disturbing but in a good way.

So, in all, it was a very good fic and I enjoyed it.

raths_kitten January 30 2011, 01:02:29 UTC

Yeah, the prompt asked for non-sexual. It's what drew me to it. There's plenty of pet!play fics, but this isn't it. In a way, I wrote beastiality. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that it made you think. :)

mihka_mc January 30 2011, 07:06:47 UTC

Yeah just in a way but it was tasteful which is why I kept reading. And yes it made me think more about the morality of the human race and how far we can go to make ourselves feel better in this world.