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raths_kitten

Winchester & Colt - Chapters 9-11 (3/3)

Jul 08, 2009 23:45

genre: rpf au, rating: r, winchester & colt, pairing: jensen/jared, fics, fandom: supernatural

Comments 78

samazon13 July 10 2009, 09:30:10 UTC

I loved this. And yes, you should definitely write sequels. These are such well-drawn characters, there is a lot of room to play.
Thank you so much for writing and for sharing!
-Samazon

raths_kitten July 10 2009, 14:43:40 UTC

Thank you very much. Yeah... It does give me lots of room to develop a 'verse, but I also have other fic ideas. I'll see. But I'm happy to you you'd want to read more. :)

batina35 July 10 2009, 15:31:07 UTC

Wow, this was so damn good. I loved the range of this fic - at first I was laughing at Jared's cute dorkiness and the smirky way Jensen constantly dealt with Jared learning his true identity. But by the end I was tearing up for Jensen and his evil uncle (JDM). And I loved the way it ended with Jared wanting to protect Jensen. It was a bit of a role reversal. I can't wait to read more from this 'verse. This first story was excellent!!!!

raths_kitten July 11 2009, 23:43:29 UTC

Thank you very much for your feedback. :)

ahora_11 July 10 2009, 15:51:52 UTC

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE ,LOVE IT!!!!!!! this was absolutely awesome and extremely well written...and yeah!!! gosh! this was amazing, it had me laughing so hard with Jared trying to be a superhero...(crashing in dumpsters and all LOLS)

This fic was a perfect mix of Batman and Iron man, and just the right balance of the two...I love how jensen was a down to heart millionaire, how he wasn't flashy or cliche since he was a superhero at night, i love how he had layers, cuz at first i thought he'd be a total douche, but instead he had a heart of gold...and Jared, god bless is soul, but seriously i loved, loved how portrayed them! okay so maybe I wanted them to kiss at the end...BUT the UST was sooo well done and besides im looking forward to sequels! :D Oh? i totally want jensen to punish jared, because seriously jared sounded kinky when he spaced out and fantazied about jensen tying him up!

GREAT JOB! and you rock!

Ps. I really LOVED your fic, but obviously with all my squeeing, you must have figured that out! :D

raths_kitten July 11 2009, 23:47:25 UTC

Iron Man, really? I never saw the movie but read a few comics. Which is why I never saw the movie... *coughs* Tony Stark was nothing but a conceited ex-drunk in those. But hey, thank you. I'm really happy you've liked my fic. :)

And hey, who wouldn't want to be tied up by Jensen. ;) I'll see about all of that when I have the UST explode. ;)

flawedamythyst July 11 2009, 01:52:21 UTC

HAHAH! Okay, I love the author's note at the end. *hugs* You're awesome. This fic is awesome - can't wait for the sequels. (Which I'll totally Beta for you, if you want, but I understand if you'd prefer me to keep my nit-picking to myself.)

raths_kitten July 11 2009, 23:48:49 UTC

*hugs back* I really thought I had to mention it. I mean, I was blatantly ignoring my beta. ;)

But yes, I'll so take you up on that offer! Thank you. :)

flawedamythyst July 12 2009, 01:48:51 UTC

No problem! I promise to try and be slightly quicker next time.

raths_kitten July 14 2009, 13:59:46 UTC

Pft, you had time now. I'd have put it on the backburner, too. Which reminds me I totally forgot about your fic. Gah! Damn Harry Potter marathon and afternoon classes. So really, do not feel bad!

Besides, the sequels are gonna be a lot shorter. ;)

kuhekabir July 11 2009, 15:26:01 UTC

this was really great, i totally loved jared's voice...Thanks for sharing :)

raths_kitten July 11 2009, 23:49:35 UTC

Thanks for leaving feedback! I'm glad you liked it. :)