Loving this! The car wouldn't start! Is that enough to change the fate of the world? Maybe ...
Love these bits of memory Sam has, of what could have, might have, DID happen. And Dean'a sudden realization that Sam had to dig himself out of his own grave. It's the same decision he would have made, something tells him, the kind of terrible devotion that has destroyed them over and over again. Yes indeed.
I've FINALLY started the story! I've been saving it for a treat if I survived the day, and ta-da! Here I am after midnight reading chapter 1. I love Sam! I have no idea what's up with him, but it's wonderful.
I really hope you don’t mind me commenting individually on each chapter, now that I have time to review. I know you’re probably going to be bombarded with reviews:) But otherwise I’ll forget what I wanted to say.
First of all, amazing start. Buried alive, yikes! I kinda felt claustrophobic reading it (but that’s a good thing). And you hurt Sam so wonderfully:) I’m definitely digging the Sam whumpage.
Also, one of the little things that I really liked is when Sam’s sitting on the couch, and Dean’s holding on to his shoulder, and then keeping close and in contact when they’re sitting next to each other.
I love the fact that Dean didn’t make the deal because the car didn’t start… Awesome first chapter. Your writing and your story are both incredible!
Are you kidding?!? Individual comments are AWESOME!
This story is pretty much all about the Sam!whump. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea as result, but I'm glad it worked for you.
I kind of wanted to rebuild the brothers' relationship, even if it turns out a little differently than before. Seasons 4 and 5 broke my heart, and this was my chance to mend my broken heart again. :)
I love the fact that Dean didn’t make the deal because the car didn’t start…
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I'm loving this. Won't get to finish it before work, but it's great. You have no idea how long I've been looking forward to your post.
Thanks for this!
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You have no idea how long I've been looking forward to your post.
*blushes crimson*
You totally made my day. \o/
I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint...
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Love these bits of memory Sam has, of what could have, might have, DID happen. And Dean'a sudden realization that Sam had to dig himself out of his own grave. It's the same decision he would have made, something tells him, the kind of terrible devotion that has destroyed them over and over again. Yes indeed.
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Glad you're enjoying it! :)
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Thank you so much for commenting right away! I am intrigued to see what you'll think by the end.
I love Sam! I have no idea what's up with him, but it's wonderful.
LOL Poor Sam. He has no idea what's up with him either, but it'll all get sorted out.
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First of all, amazing start. Buried alive, yikes! I kinda felt claustrophobic reading it (but that’s a good thing). And you hurt Sam so wonderfully:) I’m definitely digging the Sam whumpage.
Also, one of the little things that I really liked is when Sam’s sitting on the couch, and Dean’s holding on to his shoulder, and then keeping close and in contact when they’re sitting next to each other.
I love the fact that Dean didn’t make the deal because the car didn’t start… Awesome first chapter. Your writing and your story are both incredible!
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This story is pretty much all about the Sam!whump. It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea as result, but I'm glad it worked for you.
I kind of wanted to rebuild the brothers' relationship, even if it turns out a little differently than before. Seasons 4 and 5 broke my heart, and this was my chance to mend my broken heart again. :)
I love the fact that Dean didn’t make the deal because the car didn’t start…
Heh. It's all in the details...
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