Voi ch'entrate

[ratherastory]

From the multi-fandom horror comment-fic meme going on over at sharp_teeth.

Title: Voi ch'entrate
Prompt: From a prompt by the lovely and talented roque_clasique: Dean, Sam, whoever -- horror retelling of the Labyrinth myth. (not the Henson movie *g*). Original prompt can be found here.
Spoilers: None. Maybe a couple of really vague spoilers for Seasons 4-5, but if you

Comments

[debbiel66]

Wonderful - the tension starts from the first line and doesn't let go. I don't know how you write these so quickly, but you do a wonderful job. Thank you!

[ratherastory]

Glad you liked it! I was a little uncertain about this -it took a turn I wasn't really expecting.

[riama82]

That was awesome! With all the hurt and all that tension, and those wonderful descriptions... I could (almost) literally feel their pain, and I loved it! :-D

[ratherastory]

Thank you!

I'm glad you couldn't literally feel their pain, because I hurt them a LOT. :P

[werty30]

Very scary. Brrr-guh! *shakes off the fear* LOL at your disclaimer!

[ratherastory]

Hee! I'm glad it was effective.

I get almost as much of a kick out writing the disclaimers as I do the story. :)

[primrose_1]

You gave me the shivers! That thing's voice creeped me out!

[ratherastory]

When I first wrote the fic, I didn't have the voice in it at all, and then I realized that the story wasn't remotely scary because I hadn't really hinted at the Evil Thing Lurking In The Shadows. Glad the voice worked!

[mtee]

That was very good. It was creepy and I wasn't sure what was going on.. so I felt all tense.

Loved it and thank you

[ratherastory]

Heh. I'm not sure what's going on myself, to be honest. ;)