Do You Still Feel Me? (The Altered Senses Remix)

[ratherastory]

Title: Do You Still Feel Me? (The Altered Senses Remix)
Summary: After a lifetime of sharing absolutely everything with his brother, right down to his last thought, Dean's world goes silent. Written for kamikazeremix, based on jacyevans' the senses might alter the way that you feel. Originally posted here.
Characters: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Warnings: consensual sibling

Comments

[jennytork]

POWERFUL!!!!

[ratherastory]

Thank you very much!

[mdlaw]

That was devastating. m :)

[ratherastory]

It was really hard to write, too. :/ Glad you liked it!

[rbmi_fan]

That was awesome. I felt like crying at the end of it, but still. Awesome. <3

[ratherastory]

Thank you so much! It's a real compliment for an author to get a comment like "you made me feel like crying." :)

[strgazr04]

This was amazing! I just read the original story. Can't believe you got all this from a much shorter fic! Great job.

[ratherastory]

Thank you! This actually almost turned into a much longer story, but I decided that concision was my friend and whittled it down to a more concentrated form of its former self.

[cappy712]

Man just as that episode has me in tears so many times, this had me in tears. I loved the idea of the connection between them. That was beautiful, thank you for sharing.

[ratherastory]

It's a brutal, brutal episode. Probably the death on SPN that affected me the most, because it was the first, and it was just so... quiet, you know? Sam just drops to his knees and breathes his last, and there's nothing. God. Just so devastating. So naturally I had to write it into a fic and make it worse. :P

Glad you liked it!