A Pre-Existing Condition

Sep 20, 2011 20:31

Title: A Pre-Existing Condition
Summary: From a prompt by desertport at the hawaii_50_hc h/c comment-fic meme. Steve and Danny are imprisoned for some reason or other and held in two rooms separated by an opaque wall that lets a little sound through. One or the other is injured, and/or maybe being interrogated by the bad guys, and all the other one can do is listen and ( Read more... )

fanfic, danno *hearts* steve, h50, comment-fic is eating my brain, danno, bad timing verse, steve

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jesseofthenorth September 21 2011, 04:02:22 UTC
Excellent use of the prompt! And yay for more Art of Bad Timing!
Very well done. You sure do a thorough job of kicking the crap out of these guys :D

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:56:07 UTC
*beams*

Thank you! I have a couple more ideas for this, so I guess I'm starting yet another 'verse. *sigh* At least people like 'verses, right?

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micheleeeex September 21 2011, 04:49:25 UTC
I love this!!

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:56:50 UTC
Thank you!

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sgflutegirl September 21 2011, 04:50:08 UTC
So much love for this!!!

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 12:57:08 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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embroiderama September 21 2011, 04:52:11 UTC
Eeeeeeee, awesome! Steve's helplessness and the way Danny's deteriorating condition is clear even before we can see him hurt just *perfectly*.

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 13:02:27 UTC
*bounce*

I am very, very mean to Danno. Good thing we all enjoy it so much. ;)

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ratherastory September 21 2011, 13:12:18 UTC
I had this idea in mind before the meme, but when the prompt came up it was the perfect excuse to write it. I have a few more ideas for this, so I guess that makes it a 'verse now. ;)

Glad you liked it!

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