Be Still, My Heart

[ratherastory]

Title: Be Still, My Heart
Summary: Written for the H50 h/c comment-fic meme that's going on right now at hawaii_50_hc, for a prompt by the lovely and talented sinnerforhire. Steve/Danny: Steve and Danny have to chase down a suspect. Afterwards, Steve brushes off Danny's comments about having chest pain and shortness of breath as his typical exaggerations--until Danny

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[morganoconner]

Stop. Making. Me. Read. This. Fandom.

*grumble grumble*

Spectacular as always, despite telling my brain to stop enjoying it. :P

[peppervl]

She keeps doing it to me too. I've never seen the show. *dramatic sigh*

[morganoconner]

I've seen one episode and didn't care much for it. Yet somehow, ratherastory's H50 fic is utterly addictive.

Rawr.

[ratherastory]

*grins and blushes*

[embroiderama]

OH DANNY! I love this, the way it slides from normal into very serious and scary. I suspect Steve's going to be impossible after this--Grace, too.

[ratherastory]

Poor Danny. Steve will never let him hear the end of it. He'll be making brand new faces every time Danny so much as looks at a malasada. ;)

[embroiderama]

And Grace with her big, sad eyes! *shakes head* Poor Danno.

[ratherastory]

He's doomed. Utterly doomed.

[sinnerforhire]

I should really try to write something that doesn't involve whumping Danny, at some point, shouldn't I?

NO YOU ABSOLUTELY SHOULD NOT.

Where do I begin? I love EVERY SINGLE WORD of this. Steve smacking the wiseass perp! The bitchy receptionist! Loopy-on-painkillers!Danny! SO MUCH AWESOME in so few words!

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[ratherastory]

LOL

I had fun writing it. Thank you for the awesome prompt!

I should at least give Steve a turn with the whumping...

[sinnerforhire]

Well, if you absolutely *have* to whump Steve, I suggest this prompt. And then, once you get that out of your system, there's always the migraine!Danny prompt... (hint, hint!)

[ratherastory]

LOL

You are shameless. ;)

I am still poking at the meme, but work keeps getting in my way...

[dante_s_hell]

What a nice surprise for lunch! I just love your anxious Steve.

[ratherastory]

Thank you! Anxious!Steve is one of my favourites to write, does it show? ;)

[finduilas_clln]

Wonderful! This was such a great read.

[ratherastory]

Thank you very much! I do love a good comment-fic meme. :)