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The Breathing Rose

Aug 30, 2011 21:18

Title: The Breathing Rose
Summary: Jared's asthma acts up, resulting in a really bad day. Jensen helps.
Characters: Jared, Jensen
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 3,508
Disclaimer: NONE OF IT IS REAL, OKAY? IT'S ALL FAKE! No, seriously. Borrowing likenesses for fun and no profit. Obviously these are not the real people whose names I used, there is no ( Read more... )

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Comments 79

klutzy_girl August 31 2011, 01:27:29 UTC

Aww, cute! I felt so bad for Jared (Asthma sucks), but I'm glad he had Jensen there to help him. And he stayed and knew exactly what Jared wanted! That was adorable.

Loved this!

ratherastory August 31 2011, 01:34:53 UTC

Thank you! A bit of harmless fluff to get things rolling again. Glad you liked it! :)

peppervl August 31 2011, 02:04:20 UTC

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You should write J2 more often. *nods* I adored this. *smishes you tightly* Poor Jared. *pets him*

*quickly gets out of Jensen's way*

*pets Jensen too, for good measure*

ratherastory August 31 2011, 02:13:07 UTC

:D

I'm so glad you liked it! Yeah, poor Jared, but I fixed it in the end, so I don't feel too bad about it. ;)

morganoconner August 31 2011, 02:22:30 UTC

Oh my God. Poor Jared, but even still, this is like the most adorable thing ever. Jensen, taking care of your boy. ♥ *smishes them both*

ratherastory August 31 2011, 02:52:24 UTC

♥

I was very mean to Jared, but I fixed it all in the end, so that makes it all right. Right? Right?

greeneyes_fan September 1 2011, 05:01:32 UTC

Definitely, you fixed it.

Weirdly enough, I only grew an asthma-story kink after developing asthma.

I probably don't want to know what that says about my brain.

ratherastory September 1 2011, 11:21:43 UTC

Heh. I figure it's a misery-loves-company thing. "If I'm going to be sick, I'm taking the Winchesters down with me!" ;)

peepingdru August 31 2011, 02:57:10 UTC

*wibbles*...sooooo good....:D U sound like u really know your asthma!

ratherastory August 31 2011, 03:02:10 UTC

Thank you! And there may have been slightly obsessive research about this. Not that I have a kink, or anything... *cough*

sothcweden August 31 2011, 02:59:53 UTC

Very cute. When the fic is about the Js being actors making Supernatural, I'm honestly more fond of this kind of fic than romance, because it emphasizes their strong friendship. I leave the romance for the AUs.

ratherastory August 31 2011, 03:03:33 UTC

I do love the romance in the AUs, same as you. No objection to it in the closer-to-reality RPS, but there's so little gen fic out there for RPF that it's nice to dabble in it now and again. :)