Most Dangerous When It Comes Late In Life 1/2

[ratherastory]

Title: Most Dangerous When It Comes Late In Life
Prompt/Summary: Steve gets the measles. Danny steps up. Written for the measles/chicken pox prompt at 10_hurt_comfort.
Characters: Steve/Danny (pre-slash)
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 14,471
Disclaimer: Alas, still the property of CBS.
Warnings: Vague spoilers all the way to 1.12.
Neurotic Author's Note #1: This one

Comments

[keiramarcos]

Haven't read this yet but I'm about to. I just wanted to say that I think your neurotic author notes are great. LOL.

[ratherastory]

Hee! Thank you. They've become sort of a 'thing' in my stories, so I'm glad you find them entertaining.

[ousoonerfan]

Your icon, oh my the man is fine, love him

[tmelange]

Great first half. I'm so glad this story isn't over, lol. I'm so totally into it. :)) Bravo!

[ratherastory]

Thank you very much! :)

[odysseaia]

Oh. My. Goodness. That's it. I'm friending you right now, because I can't risk missing a single fic of yours.

I really, really love the way you capture the boys' voices and personally I think that dialogues (verbal and non-verbal ones, using Steve's "faces") are your forte. So basically I'm just flaily and fangirly and enthusiatsic about this story and I'd just love to read what went on when Danny brought Steve to Grace's school on career day. Sounds hilarious.

By the way, would you mind if I go and illustrate a couple of your stories from time to time? You provide really nice mental images :)

[ratherastory]

*g*

Always happy to have new friends!

And are you KIDDING? I would love it if you illustrated my stories! *twirls you*

[odysseaia]

*hugs back*

...in that case I've got a little gift for you!

Thanks for letting me illustrate your stories. They're addicting. Put a warning on them.

[haunted1019]

Loving the first half and now I'm off to read the next. Great job!

[ratherastory]

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the second part too!

[abbeyrd62561]

OH this is just wonderful. Love how they banter back and forth you have the Danny rant and sarcasim down along with the way Steve always answers or baits him..lol...OH I love a Steve puppy dog. And I'm thinking that being so sick he misses his mom and how she used to take care of him and Daddy is such a great dad that he is perfect for the job like you wrote. And I believe Steve feels the same way Danny does and that's why Danny gets those looks that he can't describe from Steve when Steve thinks Danny isn't looking. OMG I just adore Steve curling up on Danny's lap and snuggling in his sleep . I'm going on to part two.

[ratherastory]

Awesome, I hope you enjoy the rest too!