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Diable en Boite

Mar 07, 2011 22:21

Title: Diable en Boite
Prompt/Summary: Written for salt_burn_porn for the prompt Jack-in-the-box. Castiel pops in on Dean unexpectedly, and Dean is delighted. Not that Dean was pining, or anything. Nope.
Characters: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 4,215
Disclaimer: Not real, not mine, no harm intended, please don't sue, I would starve and have to eat my ( Read more... )

fanfic, oh my god i wrote slash, fic challenge, diable en boite, dean-o, pwp, prompt, everything is about sex, castiel totally deserves his own tag, salt_burn_porn

Comments 57

cousinmary February 9 2011, 16:54:13 UTC

so hot! awesome to wake up to this :)

ratherastory February 9 2011, 17:58:45 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!

earth_heart February 9 2011, 20:39:39 UTC

*chokes*

Folyhuckingshit. o_o

That was glorious. The detail was incredibly, and they were perfectly in-character. Jebus. I need to go collect myself now.

*hugs you tightly before stumbling away*

ratherastory February 10 2011, 11:31:21 UTC

Aw! *hugs you back*

I'm really glad you liked it, and that the characterization felt right to you. :)

earth_heart February 10 2011, 16:58:24 UTC

HAH. *gigglesnerk at icon*

They did. <3 You are very talented.

janie_tangerine February 9 2011, 20:49:19 UTC

... UNF. No wow but this was some excellent porn and now I need a bunk and a shower, not necessarily in that order. Wow, really, this was amazing. The characterizations were spot-on and I liked that other than scorching hot porn this completely nailed their feelings towards each other omg. Your Dean voice is so awesome. And the dialogue was brilliant, and I loved Cas kind of surprising Dean and taking the lead even if it didn't seem like it was going to go that way. And I think my coherence is over, you fried my brain. ;) this was awesome! And if this isn't your comfort zone, it totally doesn't show. *fans*

ratherastory February 10 2011, 11:32:55 UTC

*beams*

Thank you so much! It's not my comfort zone yet, but given that I've been writing a wee bit more smut lately, apparently it's becoming my comfort zone. Who knew? ;)

I'm really glad it worked for you, and that the voices felt right, since I was a bit worried about that.

Also, I apparently have a thing for toppy!Cas.

artemisdesari February 9 2011, 21:25:39 UTC

Somewhere I have a brain. I think the hot of this may have melted it.

ratherastory February 10 2011, 11:48:26 UTC

LOL

Thank you!

mulder200 February 9 2011, 21:29:18 UTC

“I thought you were a virgin,” he chokes out after a moment. It's the most acceptable compromise he can come up with. Otherwise the words that want to spill out are please don't leave me, and don't let go, ever, please, God, and he doesn't think he'd ever live that down.

Cas doesn't stop what he's doing, letting his hands drift possessively over Dean's body, and damn if that isn't making his dick twitch a little, and Dean isn't exactly twenty anymore, to have that kind of turnaround time. “Dean,” he growls, “don't assume that because I lack a small modicum of human experience, that it automatically follows that I don't know what I'm doing.”

LOL! Although, it makes me wonder what kind of "research" he's been doing on sex.

He risks opening his eyes, finds Castiel looking back at him, and almost closes them again rather than face the scrutiny, but this is kind of big, and he owes it to Cas to grow a pair, man up, and own what they've just done. “Is this okay? I mean, are we ( ... )

ratherastory February 10 2011, 11:49:53 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad you thought it was in-character. And yeah, I would have loved to be a fly on the wall while Cas was "researching."