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A Taste of Ratha's Courage - Chapter 1 excerpt

Mar 28, 2008 11:41

Ratha's Courage
by Clare Bell
Excerpt copyright 2007

Chapter One

A shiver of excitement went through Ratha. She began her stalk, belly fur brushing the ground. Grass whispered past her legs as she felt the slow controlled power of each muscle. Her tail-tip tingled with the urge to twitch, but she held it still.

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ratha's courage, prehistoric animals, pumas, cheetahs, big cats, cat fantasy, clare bell, cougars

Comments 4

thistle_chaser March 28 2008, 20:25:08 UTC

Wow, so great! I can't wait to get my hands on the whole book. :D

netolu March 29 2008, 08:17:32 UTC

From obsidian cheetahs to prehistoric felines your works never cease to amaze. Counting down the moments until I will be able to add this work into my collection.

minniemousegirl June 26 2008, 00:29:00 UTC

I love this! Very well written!

Thank you! minniemousegirl June 26 2008, 23:04:20 UTC

I probably re-wrote this section about 4-5 times, so I'm glad to see that the effort worked. By the time one has done so many re-writes, you can't really see the effect any more. Thank you so much for letting me know that what was in my brain (and Ratha's) got out on paper.

If you want to read more, the first 6 chapters are available on Jim Baen Webscriptions as free files. Here's the link:

Ratha's Courage http://www.webscription.net/p-822-rathas-courage.aspx

If you do, enjoy!

CB