The Audience With Forever (Part Two, Chapter Two)

[brainrat]

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Ed's glasses clattered amidst the coffee cups and beer bottles and pens on the table. He loosened his tie, letting it draped, half-knotted, over his shoulders, his eyes dark at the midnight hour. "It's like chasing a retarded chipmunk."

Al stood behind him, his hands warm through Ed's wrinkled

Comments

[himura_arimikoe]

Bad at writing sex scenes my ass.

Chasing a retarded chipmunk. International House of Jailbait.

THE BLOOD-SEAL. <3

[wofl_iron]

OMG MORE. \o/

What amuses me the most about this fic (aside from it being a brilliant crossover) is how watching Ed and Al's relationship as brothers, in turn, affects Sam and Dean's relationship as brothers.

This part: "Again, not a problem, considering I don't fuck scrawny prepubecent kids who - Sam, get your fucking hand off me, it's creepin' me out."

*rolls around laughing* In fact, that entire conversation made me lol pretty hard.

Aside from that, your prose is enchanting and I'm very curious to see where it goes from here.

[jeethree]

Al's is Ed's. Do not touch the blood seal unless you have a death wish-- I immensely enjoyed Ed reaffirming that that it is his mark.

And like that cheesy narrator, I must do the promo question- "What next?"

I cannot wait to read the next chapter in this eventful tale. :D

[laissesfaire]

Late comment is very late, I'm sorry. XO;;;

I think this story gets more and more amazing as I read it. It's easy for most people to get sucked into a good story-- but this one takes me and pulls me in like most can't.

You have just the right mixture of morbidity and humor and realism that combined, it's breathtaking. Al, Ed, and Noa all transform back and forth from trusting and fascinating to almost frightening-- and like I've said before, as time goes on, you make it all so impossibly flowing that I completely forget that it's a crossover. You've spoiled me-- I doubt I could read any other crossover fic without thinking that it didn't live up to this one.

You go so easily from light-heartedness to suspense and back to a sort of quiet, truthful beauty in your prose that I always love to see and crave more of. You're definitely one of my favorite authors, and have been since I first read your writing, and it always makes me happy to see when you've posted. <3