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rat_chan

A-Team: Unworthy

Feb 26, 2011 20:20

Title: Unworthy
Pairing: Hannibal/Face (one-sided)
Rating: R (for language and sexual content)
Word Count: 1270
Disclaimer: Not my characters. No profit made here.
Summary: Young Lieutenant Peck imagines, for a brief moment, what it would be like if Colonel Smith returned his feelings. Pre-movie.
Notes: Reposted from the kinkememe. Written in response to ( Read more... )

angst, fiction, hannibal x face, a-team

Comments 6

mad_persephone February 27 2011, 01:24:35 UTC

whoa. This was fantastic and moving. So well written. This just works so well. really really good job.

rat_chan February 27 2011, 06:01:37 UTC

Thank you very much. You're making me blush! =D

trista_zevkia February 27 2011, 08:22:47 UTC

I agree that Face has issues, hiding under his con man charm. I also think Hannibal can see all that, but can't see how much he means to his men.
This was very nice, the angst sandwiched around the smut! I find myself wondering if I've got a leather fetish, or just a Hannibal thing going on ;p

Excellent!

rat_chan February 27 2011, 09:27:25 UTC

Oh, I know I've got a bit of an obsession with leather, if not a fetish. I just love the smell and the feel of quality leather.

Thank you! Glad you liked it. =)

purple_spock February 28 2011, 05:41:37 UTC

This is really great, and I love your take on Face. I've always thought that that boy had deep personal issues and I think you brought them to light really well. Great job all around.

rat_chan February 28 2011, 12:18:42 UTC

Thanks again!
I don't remember much of the TV show (my older siblings watched it -- I was just in the room and all I really remember is the van, the theme song, and Mr. T), but from movie Face, I got the vibe that his inability to commit was due to emotional insecurity and that he always felt he had something to prove. It's part of what I like about his character.