Prince of Tennis: tarnished glitter

[raspberryichigo]

Title: tarnished glitter
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Characters/Pairings: Akaya & Niou (Niou/Akaya?)
Rating: PG.
Genre: Introspection, ficlet, gen.
Word Count: 705
Notes: Akaya 1st person POV. Written for disorientedly's POV challenge. :) Any grammar mistakes you find are Akaya's, because I'm too lazy to proofread. Ahaha. >_>

Comments

[disorientedly]

Oh my God, and okay, I am temporarily rendered speechless but that never lasts long anyways. Kirihara! Kirihara first-person, which I've never read before but it's amazing and perfect and beautifully in-character. ♥

*flailflailflail* asljkflasdfjsklafjasl

[raspberryichigo]

jfkljksjds I'm insanely glad you liked it!! ♥!

kfjlkjasdlksd Aaaah, you're making me flail, too!! XD

[uminohikari]

♥ I don't usually like 1st person POV at all, but this was nicely done!

[1adychaos]

Oh, wow. I really like that one. You have his voice down pat (not surprising).

[raspberryichigo]

Ahaha! I'm ridiculously proud of it. Thank you~!

[raspberryichigo]

ajskdljasd Aaaaah! Thank you so much! I HAVE NO IDEA, BUT THIS WAS WRITTEN SO LONG AGO AKSJDKS I'VE DEFINITELY LOST MY TOUCH BY NOW.

[invidia92]

♥

This was spot-on, I heard Akaya's voice in my head the entire time. I loved the understanding between him and Niou, how he knew when Niou was Niou and not Yagyuu, and the entire story was perfect!

And Yagyuu is scary...

[raspberryichigo]

Aww, thanks! I love writing Akaya; he's so easy for me to step into. ♥

He iiis. :P