[Fic] Yabu's tears

[rarsii23]

Title: Yabu's tears
Pairing: Takabu, Takanoo
Rating: PG (i guess)
Genre : Romance, Fluff.
Summary: Yabu was being a bastard, Inoo got mad, Takaki cried, etc etc (I'm so bad at summary) xP

Flashback.

“Oi! Takaki! Do you want to go eat ramen after the concert, with the others too? Or you have a plan with Yabu already?” Inoo asked.

“Ah no I don’t have any

Comments

[x_vickiiiie]

BOOYAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
yay. I'm procrastinating around my attempt to revise for math test tmr.\

lol. darn, i should of had read the rating first.
I was disappointed when I read to the end and there wasn't any porn :( :(
I would think that hospital!sex with Inoo and Yabu would spice things up towards the end :D

[rarsii23]

lolol. you naughty girl!! expecting smut xP
Lol. takanoobu threesome in the hospital would definitely be hot 8D

[kaoru_yubiwa]

hate Yabu for being a bastard!! and make that pretty Inoo mad.. >_<

And he felt so lonely without Takaki’s presence next to him before the concert…
its his fault for not replying takaki's messages after all..

the ending is nice.. but didn't see the accident coming.LOL!! I love this one, Rarsii~~ I read it while listening to Cannon and almost caught me on tears?? xDDD

[rarsii23]

gyahahahha.. xDD I totally can't imagine puri puri Inoo attempted to punch Yabu's face XDDDD

Hahaha.. at first I didnt plan any accident either, but Jasmine wants it to be angst. lol. xD

Thanks a lot for reading an commenting ♥

[aliyah411]

I love this! TAKABU is like one of my fav pairings! I hope u write more. :D

[rarsii23]

Takabu is my favorite pairing in JUMP too ^^
Thank you for reading and commenting xD

[rarsii23]

do you really need to comment in essay format *sarcastic face* xDDDD

lol. the author's note is true ok!!! xP

and yesh. I think I made Yabu looks like a bastard, that's why Niel is converting to Takanoo.. hahahahah xDD and I can't imagine the puri puri Inoo acting all angst trying to punch Yabu 8DDDDD

Teheheheeee.. Thanks for reading and giving me ideas yo!! xD♥

[helbus_421]

Baka Yabu, hurting both Inoo and Takaki... sniff sniff. Wahhhh poor Inoo. >< Being hurt physically and emotionally but thats because he loves Takaki ne and he was acting all cool in the end. xDD sighs, such a lovely fic, i wish to read more from you in the future. -3-

[rarsii23]

Inoo acting all cool is ♥ xD

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!! ^_^♥