A Git For articcat621: Under the Mistletoe, (Hermione/Charlie)

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Author: flipflop_diva
Recipient: articcat621
Title: Under the Mistletoe
Pairing: Hermione Granger/Charlie Weasley
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,931
Summary: There was a reason Hermione was reluctant to go to a Christmas party hosted by George and Angelina Weasley. And that was before she knew about the enchanted mistletoe.
Author's Notes: Thank you to A for all the help!

Comments

[articcat621]

Oh my GOODNESS, this was amazing! I adored it! There's nothing better than fics with mischievous mistletoe, and I love that it was following Charlie around. Lol. The realisation when they both found out they liked each other was perfect! Thank you so much! <3 <3

[stgulik]

Well, that was completely adorable. I can't imagine why Charlie and Hermione waited so long to tell each other they were attracted! Thank goodness George and Ron took the bull by the horns. Well done story, MA!

[maraudersaffair]

So, so wonderful! It put a huge smile on my face. There were so many funny lines! The joke about Hermione's dress in the beginning had me laughing! Oh, and George's "You kiss Mum with more feeling than that!" LOL. It's nice to see the Weasleys after the war, surviving and enjoying themselves without Fred. Overall, I just really love being included in their family gatherings!

And your Hermione! I loved how you characterized her. You wrote her spot on! She was sensitive, intuitive, but also a bit self-conscious. She was independent but she also needed the approval of others. You conveyed a lot of complexity about her in this short piece!

Charlie was so kind and sweet. Really liked him with her. I also liked Ron just being there to cheer them on.

Really enjoyed this!! :D

[kiertorata]

So much cuteness! And loved that steamy ending! Go Hermione :D George was fantastic in this, and I like how you referred to Hermione and Charlie having spent quite a lot of time together.