A Gift For Flipflop_diva: On the Balcony, (Pansy/Daphne, PG)

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Author:leontinabowie
Recipient: Flipflop_diva
Title: On the Balcony
Pairing: Pansy/Daphne
Rating: PG
Word Count: 640
Summary: Pansy reflects on being in love with her best friend
Author's Notes: I hope you enjoy this! I adore this pairing so it was fun to write <3

Comments

[evening12]

This is a cute story. Loved the winter setting and the little details like their cheeks being red and the quiet feel of the story.

[kiertorata]

This was lovely <3 I would love to read more of this ship from you.

[rosevalleynb]

What a lovely story, MA. The way you described the setting, Pansy's thoughts and feelings, and then the kiss... I hope for Pansy it'll evolve in something more than a kiss!

Thank you for sharing!

[kittyaugust]

Oh my, oh my, oh my! Delightful. You capture that achy crushing love so well. Just gorgeous.

[nereycamille]

Lovely! Yes, very well done, the ache and the cuteness and the humour. That moment in the kiss really moved me. I loved the detail of the shawl flowing away, I could just picture it, just as I loved the memory of them sneering at Hannah's shoes and Pansy's dilemma with Daphne's legs (and her solution). So much established about the characters in such tiny details - brilliant!
And I think the pairing works very well. I liked a Pansy that's not beautiful, like in canon.
Congratulations!