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WISHLISTS: The Last Time (Harry/Pansy)

Sep 02, 2011 09:48

Author: red_b_rackham
Recipient: the_woods_
Title: The Last Time
Pairing: Harry/Pansy (and some implied unrequited Harry/Ginny and Pansy/Draco)
Request: being held hostage; finding common ground
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 343
Summary: He always says that this is the last time.
Author's Notes: Sorry this is a bit late! Due to computer issues I was ( Read more... )

.wishlists: summer 2011, *het, user: red_b_rackham, pairing: harry/pansy

Comments 8

elle_blessing September 2 2011, 17:42:00 UTC

This was lovely. The emotions were raw and real, and the situation unfortuate and sad for both of them, but not unrealistic. I liked your prose a lot too; you got a lot crammed into so few words.

Thanks for sharing!

red_b_rackham September 8 2011, 04:00:42 UTC

Thank you!!

bluemermaid September 2 2011, 23:03:15 UTC

I love it. The dynamic between them is so sad and real. Your style is so good, so full of life. I really enjoyed reading this.

red_b_rackham September 8 2011, 04:00:53 UTC

Thank you so much!

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red_b_rackham September 8 2011, 04:01:04 UTC

Aw, thank you! :)

the_woods_ September 5 2011, 02:10:06 UTC

Hooray, I loved how you incorporated the prompt so creatively :) And with a great ending, too. Thanks for the story <3

-n

red_b_rackham September 8 2011, 04:01:21 UTC

Thanks!! Glad you liked it. :D

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red_b_rackham September 8 2011, 04:01:35 UTC

Thank you very much, I appreciate it. :D