Fic for seatbeltdrivein

Jan 09, 2011 04:20

Author: deathjunke
Recipient: seatbeltdrivein
Title: Taboo
Pairing: Narcissa/Lily
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1056
Summary: Narcissa tells her son a bedtime story.
Author’s Notes: I tried for the smut, and I even tried for some Harry/Percy slash but neither was working out. :( This fic seemed to just write itself in their stead so I really hope you enjoy it. You’re a ( Read more... )

*femslash, .fic exchange: winter 2010-2011, user: deathjunke, pairing: narcissa/lily

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seatbeltdrivein January 9 2011, 13:43:18 UTC
Pssst, mods, you've accidentally given this one the wrong years tag!

*SQUEALS* :D :D :D This! This is wonderful! And so strange, because after sign-ups were over, I remember thinking WHY DID I NOT PUT FAIRY-TALES IN MY 'WANTS' SECTION?

You've managed to fit in so many things that I never said I liked! Motherly Naricssa, little boy Draco... I absolutely love the idea of Narcissa trying to communicate things with Draco without actually saying things, like trying, in her own way, to tell him that sometimes it's alright to not want what he's meant to want.

And Draco's childhood logic? Most definitely win. XD

And the fairytale itself was gorgeous, so true to the typical fairytale style. This part - They spent the next few months dancing around each other with teasing looks, light touches, floating scents of perfume in the air and knowing smiles. The very thought of being together, and lying together in a tangled heap between the sheets of one of the massive four post beds, seemed as a temptation that the God himself couldn’t turn away ( ... )

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deathjunke January 21 2011, 00:14:15 UTC
*BIG HUGS!* :D
I'm glad you liked the fic. I did a little browsing through you lj for your recs trying to get a feel of what i should write for you. then i gave up and started tapping at the keys.

ANd FYI; Draco is made of snark and rainbows and slash, and soooo hides romance novels in his closet *snickers*

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deathjunke January 21 2011, 00:10:27 UTC
thank you, and yeah i'm a little bummed that they didn't get together but C'est la vie...or this fic anyway.

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captainpookey January 11 2011, 04:04:52 UTC
This is lovely. Poor girls, great rendition of their story as a fairytale though, and little Draco was just adorable. Well done!

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deathjunke January 21 2011, 00:08:47 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)

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peskywhistpaw January 11 2011, 18:15:13 UTC
“Theo says you get cooties from kissing girls.” He explained with a small frown on his brow, as if he couldn’t understand why his mother didn’t know something so obvious. “If they’re both girls then they already have girl cooties.”

Best justification ever! LOL. I love little Draco and his little kid logic. And the detail about Lily's eyes making you tell the truth is particularly wonderful! Great work. :)

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deathjunke January 21 2011, 00:08:22 UTC
Thank you very much.

XD.

I admit it took me a minute to come up with that. i was thinking 'how can i get Draco to think of two girls as meant to be?' theni wondered what do little boys find so repulsive about little girls and it struck me; COOTIES!

and then i giggled like a naughty 3 year old. *g*

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bluemermaid January 12 2011, 17:43:49 UTC
This is so pretty and lovely, I adore the fairytale structure, and lil!Draco is so cute! Awesome fic. :D

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deathjunke January 21 2011, 00:04:20 UTC
Thanks i'm glad you liked it :)

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