Thanks. I hit 6 months of being single (for the first time in nearly 7 years) when I was writing this, and I have to admit, all I wanted was a happy ending.
That was wonderful! I loved the little twist at the end, because I definitely was as clueless as Paravti that he was talking about her. You built up a wonderful backstory and, with it, awesome tension, and you got the characters down wonderfully. I lovelovelove your Percy, and I adored this bit: “You don’t like scenes,” she whispered to him, taking his hand nervously. He nodded, and as though recognising their surroundings for the first time, went bright red, a thin sheen of sweat appearing on his forehead almost instantly.
This was great! I love the tension you had in this story and Parvati's observations on Percy's character and the development of her personality in this story. I was not at all expecting something so lovely as this. Thank you very much!
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A fairytale, I like that :)
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Doing now :)
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That was wonderful! I loved the little twist at the end, because I definitely was as clueless as Paravti that he was talking about her. You built up a wonderful backstory and, with it, awesome tension, and you got the characters down wonderfully. I lovelovelove your Percy, and I adored this bit: “You don’t like scenes,” she whispered to him, taking his hand nervously. He nodded, and as though recognising their surroundings for the first time, went bright red, a thin sheen of sweat appearing on his forehead almost instantly.
Ack! This was awesome. :)
(And p.s. I love your icon. :D)
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