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skyearth85 July 16 2008, 22:48:50 UTC
I'm sad. I'm terribly sad ç____ç
*goes to sleep hoping for her happy place*

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skyearth85 July 16 2008, 22:50:43 UTC
p.s. but it's The conclusion of a Masterpiece. I'm very glad to have met you

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raquel_el_pillo July 17 2008, 21:03:43 UTC
Thank you very much! ^_^

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profcricket July 17 2008, 14:50:31 UTC
God, this is gorgeous. I wanted it and didn't want it, if that makes sense - now my romance with them is over, and I wish it could go on endlessly. *sighs*

I love this whole story, and this is the best ending to it that I could possibly have asked for (because you write to my whimsy, you know).

*loves*

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raquel_el_pillo July 17 2008, 21:19:36 UTC
*much love back* X)

Thank you! And whimsy away, I say. :) 'Cause now I got to find something else to busy myself with.

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aeroport_art September 6 2008, 22:26:09 UTC
Oh gosh, I can't even describe how much I enjoyed this story. It was long, sweet, and satisfying. You do an amazing job with metaphors and description--after reading it all, I have this overwhelming impression of hazy, nostalgic sensations, and color.

The pacing was outstanding as well. You found the perfect balance; the story never felt rushed, and nor did it ever drag. I am *impressed* by that, especially for such a long story!

Thank you so, so much for writing my favorite--by far--Winnix fic I have yet to discover. *mems*

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raquel_el_pillo September 8 2008, 04:36:13 UTC
Thank you very much! :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much. *melts a little*

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mllesatine October 22 2008, 10:12:18 UTC
Thank you so much for ending the fic on a positive note.

I loved it. Loved the slow pacing (that first awkward kiss), your character voices and writing style.

I'm usually not very fond of AUs but when I started reading yours, I was sucked in after the first paragraph. I'm soo lazy to quote all the lines I liked, but the ones like "he'll recall a smile that was a country onto its own, language and geography unique" are reason enough to rec this fic.

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raquel_el_pillo November 19 2008, 02:53:46 UTC
I don't know. I didn't know if you'd take it as a positive or negative ending. Not like I pulled a Dallas and went "Whooosh! It was all a ~dream~!" but I still was nerviosa...Okay, then go read profcricket's coda Eighteen. I love it to bits. X)

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