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Fic - "The Gobbler of Souls part Seven"

Dec 29, 2008 09:25

Wow! Hard to believe I am updating this! Here is part seven of "The Gobbler of Souls". Yup, this is a creepy fic based on my odd attachment to the Grooviest Hotel in Wisconsin. See http://www.lileks.com/institute/motel/intro.html for examples of the decor. (this is an ( Read more... )

gobblerfic, lee adama, bsg, dr who

Comments 10

akeyoftime December 29 2008, 19:08:50 UTC

21st century Earth = Stargate Command?

In this chapter and the last, you have a bad habit of slipping into spelling "Zak" as "Zac". Careful!

I'm delighted to see the plot on this one resolved! I love all of the differents twists you put on Gaeta - it's like you're making up for his general fandom neglect all on your own.

rap541 December 29 2008, 19:14:59 UTC

Naw, not Stargate. If you read between the lines, Felix is one of the Master's other bastard sons.(The Master raped his mom... thats why she hated the hotel) Felix is miffed with the doc not mentioning this ancestry since it ultimently means a lot of unpleasantness for Felix when Dad invaded Earth with his happy funballs of death. Felix is off hanging with Torchwood, making his own time machine.

This is just really a manifestation of my subclinical aspbergers :)

akeyoftime December 30 2008, 06:10:39 UTC

Felix in Torchwood....mmmmmmm

whyoffry January 12 2009, 06:18:15 UTC

“Do me a favor and take a picture of Laura’s face when you get there. Now come on… I need to get you back.”

Hahaha. Bastard.

rap541 January 12 2009, 14:43:56 UTC

The Doctor has his moments :)

math_camel February 1 2009, 19:18:43 UTC

Wow, I love this. I love how you tied it all together with the other story, I love how it explains the total fugly.

Rock on.

millari August 17 2009, 06:13:53 UTC

Hey! I really enjoyed this. Felix is pissed with the Doctor? And what exactly happened to Felix when the Master arrived with his happy fun balls of death?

I loved Lee's earnestness in this story, and the way he was so bloody minded about figuring out what the hell was going on. I liked savoring the little clues that kept unfolding with each chapter. And Felix slamming Lee into the wall for calling his mother a whore was a thing of beauty, even if Lee is nice in this fic.

Ysy! Now I get to read birthday fic!!!

rap541 August 18 2009, 16:05:02 UTC

Yeah - this is post-Master takes over Earth, and Felix is a pretty nice guy but ultimately there's probably a whole lotta post traumatic stress and frankly the Doctor did kill his dad....

He'll get over it. But their relationship is a bit strained.

Lee is sorta in the role of Junior Detective here. I really always liked Lee as a geniunely nice guy who sometimes makes mistakes... and his being a nice guy is pivotal to the survival of his people.

And to be fair - he never actually called Felix's mom a whore. :)

millari August 18 2009, 16:27:40 UTC

And to be fair - he never actually called Felix's mom a whore. :)

Ok, true. It's just that Felix never gets a break, and so I tend to take his side in everything, even if it's not entirely reasonable. :)

innogen March 27 2015, 04:01:55 UTC

Oh, HEY!

I just ran across this. Also? Since you are writing Dr.Who w/Donna again, can you work Felix into the storyline somewhere?

:D

...and yes, I will read the new story (Downtown Abby/Who/Donna...)
...AND please, let's ever forget that the Master turned into a woman, because that? That would really frak up Felix's head.