POTC story: Nothing Ventured

[randy_o]

Summary: Ten years later, Jack Sparrow returns with a startling proposition for Elizabeth and Will. Can they trust him? Will they? Drama/Angst. Jack Sparrow; Elizabeth Turner; Will Turner; Bootstrap Bill Turner. Warning: Spoilers

Comments

[crowdaughter]

Of course, I have read this already, but I just wanted to take the time in all the drama elsewhere and say again how much I love this story. I love the description of Elizabeth and why she does not keep a maid at the start, I love te tension between her and jack, and Jack's double take when he meets the boy. The whole thing is very well paced. In short, it is a great little peace, and I really like it. Kudos to you!

Now we just need you to find the time to post the next part... :)

Greetings to you,

Aislynn

[randy_o]

Thank you so very much Aislynn, for taking the time to comment after all your excellent input elsewhere.

And, at last, I have the time to post chapter two. Ain't we having some fun now? ;)

[jynky]

Sorry it's taken me ages. Silly point to make, but I love the names of Elizabeth’s ships - Odysseus and Penelope.
LOL, “you know what happens to men I kiss.” Onto the next chapter! Love it so far. You've actually got me feeling sorry for Elizabeth and I'm not overly fond of her.

[randy_o]

Silly point to make, but I love the names of Elizabeth’s ships - Odysseus and Penelope.

No -- not a silly point at all. I've been waiting with bated breath for someone to notice that little detail, and you're the first. A big, fat, sloppy cyber-kiss for you!