The Height of Fashion

Jan 16, 2009 11:14

Title: The Height of Fashion
Pairing: Elijah/Orlando
Rating: R
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes it is made up
Feedback: As always, any feedback is welcome!
Notes: AU.  Written for Orlijah_Month 2009, Prompt 14 - Picture of Models

Strutting his stuff on the catwalk... )

elijah/orlando, au

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verangel January 16 2009, 12:08:12 UTC
This was absolutely gorgeous. Quiet and steamy hot. I could feel the tension leading to this leisure interlude. :P v

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randomdarling January 17 2009, 10:36:35 UTC
Aw, thanks so much for reading and leaving such great feedback! :)

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tweedle_ January 16 2009, 17:50:45 UTC
'...tilting his hips in that unusual, oddly sexy manner he has. Yup, I can see it. Great description. I love it when I was expecting one thing and something else happens. I was expecting some sort of competition or... I don't know what! And it was simply because Elijah turns Orlando on. :)

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randomdarling January 17 2009, 10:37:37 UTC
I thought about them having some sort of competition between them...maybe a lack of confidence from one of them, or something...but in the end it was just more fun to write some love. :) Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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randomdarling January 17 2009, 10:38:14 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it, thank you! I loved the picture prompt - some of those clothes were gorgeous. :)

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lisabellex January 16 2009, 19:47:27 UTC
Wow. You sure know how to pack a punch! That was sizzling, red-hot.

They fuck quietly - there is no lock on the dressing room door,

Gah! It's details like that, that I love. Oh, the thrill of possible discovery.

Nice one.

:D

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randomdarling January 17 2009, 10:38:58 UTC
Aw, thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it, nice to know you liked the possibility of them being discovered. ;)

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violettefemme January 17 2009, 22:24:46 UTC
This was great. I love the image of them as models... especially short-arse Elijah. :-)

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randomdarling January 18 2009, 11:02:02 UTC
Yeah, I can completely imagine Orlando as a model - Elijah was a bit harder to visualise, lol! Thanks forreading and commenting! :D

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