Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder - Part Fourteen

[randomdarling]

Title: Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Rating: PG13-R, PG13 this part
Part: Fourteen
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any feedback (inc. CC) is welcome.
Notes: AU. Comes from a plot bunny by

Comments

[cara_dee]

Oh no! Second to last part, but my its been a lovely adventure. :) So sweet, and I loved how you heaved the fairy tale back into it with the "happily ever after." Oh darling you are my heart for taking this up, and doing it so well. You always tell me this, so I'm returning the favor- you write beautifully, and the way you describe things and tell a story have me truly captivated! :)

<3's

[randomdarling]

That is such a lovely comment, thank you! I had to give them a happy ending - how could I not? ;) And I only ever tell the truth with your writing. :)

[moffel83]

Awwww, so sweet!:)

They sure deserve their happily ever after! Can't wait for more. There will be more, right?*looks at you with puppy dog eyes*

[randomdarling]

They do deserve it, don't they? :)

Just one more chapter, then that's it. For now. :P

[randomdarling]

Oh and thank you as always for following through with this right to the end! *hugs*

[ingrid44]

A wee bit to sweet, don't you think? Elijah doing his thing again - leaping with looking; staying in England with no firm commitment from Dom. Hope there's no 'fall' in the last chapter, but, 'live happily ever after?' No - no fairy tale ending please.

[randomdarling]

Well, I see Elijah in this as more than a little impulsive - I'd say he uses his heart more than his head! I personally like happy endings and I thought it was fitting for this fairy tale to have a 'happily ever after'. Thank you for your comment, though. :)

[lijahlover]

I don't want it to end *pouts*

[randomdarling]

Aw, all good things must come to an end. And there's still one more left! Thanks for reading this all the way though! *hugs*

[lijahlover]

Believe me it was my pleasure *g*

[lisabellex]

I missed this when you posted, but I've found it now - yay! :)

These two - lol! Their quirky communication is so endearing and their uncertainty does make me chuckle and love them so. They might be six weeks into their grand romance, but they're still finding their feet and discovering one another, and it's a joy to 'eavesdrop' on them as they do.

This has been such an enjoyable story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and am just sorry that it's to be the last one.

Bravo.

:D

[randomdarling]

You always leave such lovely feedback, thank you! :) I think 6 weeks is probably realistic for them, especially with Dom's shyness to overcome. :)