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Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder - Part Two

Aug 26, 2009 16:41

Title: Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Rating: PG13-R, PG-13 this part
Part: Two
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any feedback (inc. CC) is welcome.
Notes: AU. Comes from a plot bunny by ( Read more... )

au, beauty in the eye of the beholder, elijah/dom

Comments 19

foxrafer August 27 2009, 22:04:13 UTC

I like the losing track of time. Good to see them getting along so well.

randomdarling August 28 2009, 09:28:25 UTC

Thanks very much - glad you're still reading!

illuins_lair August 29 2009, 03:01:20 UTC

ok. Haven´t been into The Domlijah-nest for some time and now.. I´m just..in.. You know that you are an EvilWoman right? *coughs*

and I just enjoy the view of Dom ironing his clothes and getting all wrought up about what-to-wear *mohahah - i´m sick right?*

And again the details, Babes; "His hand shook just slightly, and he hoped Elijah hadn’t seen."
whoah and Journalist!Elijah *clasps hands*

"Dom felt a completely unfamiliar wrench in his stomach, and it took him a moment to figure out that it was pride."
*nods and knows that feeling throughly*

Eh.. think I just also got a thing for the word "inexplicably" - just lovely btw

yup - about fucking time Elijah asks him out *thrums finger*

randomdarling August 29 2009, 10:28:11 UTC

Thanks for reading domlijah - I know you're an Orli girl at heart. :)

I can never choose what to wear (I mean, never!) either. :P

*more hugs*

tweedle_ August 31 2009, 16:04:17 UTC

I love Dom's awkward nervousness and really want to know more about why he's there. Go Elijah! A 'date' whether they admit to it or not. :D

randomdarling August 31 2009, 16:13:47 UTC

Thank you for commenting! And patience, all will be revealed. :)

lisabellex October 10 2009, 07:21:12 UTC

I'm adoring this.

Dom felt a completely unfamiliar wrench in his stomach, and it took him a moment to figure out that it was pride.

That really touched me.

“Hey, maybe we could do it again some time?” Elijah’s eyes were shining. “I mean, I bet you’ve still got a lot of stories...would you mind much if I did come again? Or we could go and have a drink one night or something?” He gave Dom a hopeful look.

Dom felt the beginnings of a blush heating up his cheeks. “Erm...”

Elijah’s cheeks suddenly flushed a light rose pink. “God, sorry - not as a date, just to talk...Don’t worry, I’m not trying to take advantage or anything...” He let out a nervous laugh that Dom joined in with.

Just love their interaction! This is so good.

:D

randomdarling October 10 2009, 11:15:29 UTC

I'm so glad to hear it touched you. And that you're still enjoying it, after so many parts of not all that much happening! :)