Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder - Part One

Aug 21, 2009 15:08



Title: Beauty In The Eye Of The Beholder
Pairing: Dom/Elijah
Rating: PG13-R, PG-13 this part
Part: One
Disclaimer: No I don't own them, yes this is made up.
Feedback: As always, any feedback (inc. CC) is welcome.
Notes: AU.  Comes from a plot bunny by Read more... )

au, beauty in the eye of the beholder, elijah/dom

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lijahlover August 21 2009, 15:03:45 UTC
Hmmmm I'm very intrigued about this so far :)

Yay for more Domlijah you really can't get enough of this sexy pairing!

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randomdarling August 22 2009, 09:31:55 UTC
You said it - I do love Domlijah. :)

Thanks for commenting. :)

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cara_dee August 21 2009, 15:30:49 UTC
I loved the way your wrote, and described things. Wish the chapters were longer so you could just paint such a beautiful image of what is happening. :)

But I'm very intrigued to see where your going to take this. Dom has met Elijah, now what. Can't wait for more.

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randomdarling August 22 2009, 09:33:52 UTC
Thank you, what a lovely thing to say! And yeah, hopefully the next chapters will be longer than this, but in general I keep things short. :) Thanks again for reading!

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babydazzle August 21 2009, 15:38:25 UTC
randomdarling August 22 2009, 09:34:33 UTC
I guess he's more of a metaphorical beast than a literal one, lol. Thanks for reading. :)

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moffel83 August 21 2009, 22:10:37 UTC
This is really interesting. Am really curious to see where this will lead!

Thanks for posting:)

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randomdarling August 22 2009, 09:35:15 UTC
Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, it means a lot! :)

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foxrafer August 26 2009, 13:43:13 UTC
More than a little intriguing; I like it.

just to escape this emphasis of loneliness
Such a great phrase.

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randomdarling August 26 2009, 15:10:26 UTC
Thank you very much for reading and commenting - it's great to have you say that. :)

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