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Title: Out Of The Corner
Fandom: Moffat's Fangirls United Doctor Who
Characters/Pairing: Eleven, Amy
Genre: humorish
Rating: G
Spoilers: takes place just after the new Who episode, so references to that

Comments

[marielyuy]

Omg, I love you. This is awesome. I really like the idea that he tells someone that he can regenerate BEFORE it happens. I think you captured both of them very well.

[kaffy_r]

He does not, he notes, pop his p's. He doesn't have the right shape of mouth for it this time, nor the requisite desire to shove his own voice in everyone's face.

This is brilliant, particularly the last half of the sentence. An excellent little welcoming portrait for the Eleventh Doctor. Thanks for writing it!

[ageless_aislynn]

Ooo, very nice! I really liked this part in particular:

His twenty minutes are well up, and she still believes him. If she didn't, he thinks, he might well go back to that short period of time, just for the feel of it. He likes, he finds out, to be believed. To be trusted.

That just felt very "him" (now that we finally have an episode as a frame of reference, yay! ;) ). Lovely work, I enjoyed it! :D ♥!

[apckrfan]

Lovely piece of work here. Thanks for writing and sharing.

[flinkkamingo3]

This is wonderful! Granted, I barely know these guys, but the characterization feels spot-on; this reads almost like a deleted scene from the end of the episode.