Fandom: The Devil Wears Prada / Get Smart Movie (Cross-over) Pairing: Miranda/Andy, 99/Max, 99/Miranda Spoilers: Both movies Archiving: ralst is welcome to it
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You are officially my hero. I have had such a shit day and to find this waiting for me...you are so many shades of awesome right now!
Not sure about this sentance: "In the foyer, the apple of his eye sat slumped in a chair, he peeked towards where apple of his eye sat slumped into a chair, earphones dug into her ear."
Also: "Andrea had no allowed it" *not.
But those were the only two things I picked up on them.
I totally loved how you've made 23 evil, sociopathic, and so goddamn *childish* Really, "Being a parent SUCKED." Total genius.
The way you're revealing how Miranda and Andy got together slowly, and in a jumbled order is just amazing too; each little glimpse is so well structed, so well written, and so in character. I so didn't think that was possible.
And can I just add how much I adore the twins. The characterisation of the two of them is phenomenal.
Thanks for pointing out the errors. I was literally being dragged out of my seat when I was posting so I didn't have a chance to catch everything, and I knew if I didn't post I wouldn't have had a chance to for a while. I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm having a lot of fun messing with the universe and the characters. To see them interacting is a thrill.
Oh my gosh, this is completely awesome. It's utterly adorable that Dwayne is terrified of Heather, purely because she's a kid, and more specifically, his kid. And she seems so cool!
Question, though - I thought Dwayne's name was just a pseudonymn that 23 adopted when he changed his appearance - is that actually his real name? (Considering that's what his wife is calling him...)
The flashbacks are, as always, fantastic insights into Miranda and Andy's relationship. And hot! Holy crap.
Like all the chapters before it, this update has once again made me so glad that you're running with this idea, because it has far exceeded my expectations and hopes for this crossover. Yay you!
It's his real name. I think any other time he wouldn't have used it, but since this vendetta is so personal, he wanted to use his real name. You know... to make it more real. ;-)
ANd glad you're still with me on this. I have to admit, when I started this, I didn't expect something bordering on 100 pages and still going!
This chapter was awesome! 23 afraid of his own kid lol!
Another glimpse into how Miranda and Andy got together (very hot!). I loved how Andy wouldn't even let Miranda say no and just kept going until she gave in :D
The twins were hilarious, letting them take control of Hymie was a stroke of genius *grin*
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Not sure about this sentance: "In the foyer, the apple of his eye sat slumped in a chair, he peeked towards where apple of his eye sat slumped into a chair, earphones dug into her ear."
Also: "Andrea had no allowed it" *not.
But those were the only two things I picked up on them.
I totally loved how you've made 23 evil, sociopathic, and so goddamn *childish* Really, "Being a parent SUCKED." Total genius.
The way you're revealing how Miranda and Andy got together slowly, and in a jumbled order is just amazing too; each little glimpse is so well structed, so well written, and so in character. I so didn't think that was possible.
And can I just add how much I adore the twins. The characterisation of the two of them is phenomenal.
Looking forward to another chapter soon.
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Question, though - I thought Dwayne's name was just a pseudonymn that 23 adopted when he changed his appearance - is that actually his real name? (Considering that's what his wife is calling him...)
The flashbacks are, as always, fantastic insights into Miranda and Andy's relationship. And hot! Holy crap.
Like all the chapters before it, this update has once again made me so glad that you're running with this idea, because it has far exceeded my expectations and hopes for this crossover. Yay you!
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ANd glad you're still with me on this. I have to admit, when I started this, I didn't expect something bordering on 100 pages and still going!
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Another glimpse into how Miranda and Andy got together (very hot!). I loved how Andy wouldn't even let Miranda say no and just kept going until she gave in :D
The twins were hilarious, letting them take control of Hymie was a stroke of genius *grin*
Great stuff, can't wait to read more soon ;-)
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Well, it gives them time to bond, right? ;-)
Thanks for reading!
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