Fanfic - whishes granted - prologue

[ran_mouri]

Title: Wishes Granted
Pairing: Spork (beacuse it can even go to Dr. Horrible's thighs and be ok with it)
Summary: James T. Kirk always wanted a family of his own, if only to prove his step-father wrong. Now he has what he has always wished for, if only a little different from what he expected.

Comments

Wishes Granted

[jx_walker]

I really like this and want more.

One problem to fix:

Paragraph 2: 'yes, he was still bound to his wheel chair,'

Towards the end: 'he sighed, walking towards his assistant with a small smile. “I guess I can take care of the little one until daddy comes home.”'

[maireadinish]

WOOT WOOT! Hey look, you got a double WOOT. I need to know what is going to happen next.

[devo79]

Can't wait to read more of this.

[feanna]

DAVID! There's not enough David fic around, espcially as there's a decent amount of Joanna fic. I guess it's understandable to think that because of the altered timeline Jim and Carol never met, but that's just ONE possibility.
So I'm glad that you're writing fic with David in it and I love the idea of Pike (and Number One) taking care of him.

[feanna]

Old Spock totally has to become David's awesomely cool (half-)Vulcan grandfather!

[feanna]

and now I have no idea why the other comment I left just a few minutes ago doesn't show up, sighs. Well, it was mostly: YAY, David fic!